Wow, gotta be one of the best Yaoi non cons I've read, I wish you would write more. Seriously. That was amazing and I now have to check out what else you've written cause I thought killing Ed in the first show was bad enough, you really took it to a totally different level. I would love a sequel to this but it really does stand along as well. So good and so believable. You even mentioned Dante's semi affection for Ed which no one seems to bring up. So yeah babbling now but thanks for a great fic. :)

I love it when authors can pull off a good "mind game" type story, and that ending sentence was just the icing on the cake.

i didnt like that story...but for some,odd reason, i loved it, i hated ed getting hurt, but i also wanted to read on as well. crazy ending so cool

oh. my. gosh.

wow. i did NOT expect that ending...(poor ed...!)

this was well written and i like your style.

Maybe you'll write a sequel someday? hinthint XD

Sequel? Pretty please, I want to see Al get seduced by Ed!Envy. PLEASE!

OMFG! As crazy as it sounds, will you please write another? I want to know what going to happen to poor Al! It says that Envy wanted to reward himself. But with Al? why is that a reward? I know Al would probably be easier to break than Ed, but...ah! You cant leave it there!

Kitsune Hanyou

wow, love the story, this has to be the best thing i've read in a while. you should really consider, (if you haven't already), to continue this story... fanfiction.

best of luck for you to continue.

Oh, FUCK, dude...

No way!

Don't tell me it's over!

You MUST do a sequel, that was so good!

chu~

Oh, wow. In all honesty, I wasn't sure if I would like this when I first started reading but by the second or third paragraph, I was hooked. Really good. Augh, Envy playing mind games like that. Poor Ed. I could really feel his emotion and not having any control over his mind or body anymore. And the end! Cliffhanger! I really liked this one. Good work! *faves*

Poor Edward.. This was well written. Nice desciptions and the twist at the end was awesome.

Hey! Long time no see! ^_^ I really, REALLY liked this fic...it was excellently written, and I love you described Ed's thoughts...they were so angsty, but so perfect! I could tell that Ed was slowly losing his sanity, and by the end, I found tears in my eyes in sympathy pain! Really, normally I'm not big on angst, but this was PERFECT! Everything was really clear and consise, and I hope you decide to write more of this story, it'd be awesome if Ed and Al somehow escape, and find eachother...maybe heal one another? ^_^ Sorry, like I told you, angst normally isn't my thing! Anyways, once again, this story was completely amazing, and I really hope that you decide to write more soon! Later! ^_^