I hate that Sasuke got pressured and guilt-tripped into adopting children. I hate that he immediately rolled over and did whatever Naruto wanted. Not everyone wants to be a parent. There are plenty of people who choose never to have children. Naruto had never talked to Sasuke about the possibility of having kids and then he suddenly sprung it on him that he wanted to adopt twins. WTF. Who does that?

And then, instead of taking Sasuke's feelings seriously about why he's hesitant to become a father, Itachi basically dismisses all of Sasuke's concerns. Immediately afterward, Sasuke goes running to Shizune to ask about taking the kids. All in the same night. Does anyone really think Sasuke got over his fears in only a couple of hours? Itachi's mediocre advice radically changed his perspective?

In the end when Sasuke went running to Shizune, it only looked like he was doing it to please Naruto and because Itachi had guilt-tripped him into it. There was nothing Saske said or did that makes me think he himself likes the idea of raising a child. You can't be so cavalier about adopting kids. If it doesn't work out, you can't just take them back to the store. I'm sure everything will be fine in the end since this is sappy fanfiction and there's no way to show true love in this type of fic without BABIES, but still. If this was real life, everything that's happened so far would be a recipe for disaster. Naruto started beating the shit out of Sasuke because he saw him carrying a box and thought it means he was leaving him. That's messed up and definitely NOT normal. These are the type of people who should be adopting?

And an excellent job it was.

amazing story.. perfect ending.

Love it still! So so awesome!

I really enjoyed reading this, sasuke reminded me of Dr Cox's from Scrubs and I absolutely loved the proposal

This story was written so well...loved it...

Amazing fanfic!
It was sooooooo good,I loved it and it was very your hard work going.
I loved this fanfic ~

its amaizing

This is very good!
Congrats!
Since i have little brothers i have read if you give a pig a pancake,its my favorite children's book!
I memorized it!

I work in the ER and let me say after the first chapter, you hit it right on the mark. Especially the whole "raining and it's a full moon thing".

One thing people have to realize though when writing ER stories is that many ERs don't even get emergent things (Most of the time it's a mixture of very critical things and just minor stuff). We get cases of people coming in complaining their ear hurt, that they have a headache, that they been having these symptoms for a long long time. When asking if they followed up with their PCP the answer is always no. Even if it's been 2 months they'll shrug and say they never made an appointment with their doctor.

I think that's the most infuriating thing for doctors working in the ER, is that you could have a dying lady in curtain 1, but then curtain 4 is complaining loudly that you haven't seen their baby who only has a diaper rash and how you're being a terrible doctor. So far though, I'm going to say you get an A for accurately describing a shit day in the first chapter. Good job!

I finally sat down and read this story. I must admit I totally LOVED it!

there's a fucking special place in hell for people who abused children i hope they all burn to crisp over and over again

All things considered, the story was pretty enjoyable. I loved them as doctors. I would trust them.

well that was a nice ride! lots of fluff and ups and downs and just enjoyable read! thank you for sharing!
One very small criticism although honestly not really cause I don't care about her lol was I noticed Sakura character while in the story was still very none existent too but yet reluctantly added in as though she is someone they care about/important? so it was confusing the hot and cold feelings towards her... are they even really upset that she died or just blocking it to not deal with it, and even thou she got a unit named after her it all felt very brushed aside.. yeah through out the whole story she was brushed aside/an after thought cx I figure you intended it that way so we don't get attached to much as she is going to die and her obvious feelings for Sasuke was another barrier but still shrugs, even Neji was treated better and he had even less screen time hehe anyway lovely story! runs off to read others

I love it. It was well written. I love sasunaru. How you personified sasuke and naruto is great. I hate over effeminine naruto by the way the reason i enjoyed some part of this.
What i dislike about this, well... I guess I just dont like inserting the kids so early on the story. Having them early on the chapter misfocus the full attention to what drama might have took place between the couple that does not include the kids. Its okay that they became 'family' although, for me that is, putting it on the end is better. A little warning on the beginning should suffice, that it would be more focus on rearing a family with kids than anything else. 'Tis only my opinion though, so yeah.