that was the saddest thing i've ever read.

good job!

omg this is too sad D:

i'm crying here. it's so freaking depressing! -tears-

but very good too. hehe.

*sob* Oh my god...Edward...KILLED...Bella... That...That's not normal, not right. It...it was still a great story though...*sob*

This is wonderful. And even though it's completely sick and twisted (in a beautiful way,) I can completely see Edward doing this. You captured his state of mind exceptionally.

Omg im like crying right now! this was so sad, but good.

oh god, my throat clogged up for a minute there and i seriously had to choke back a sob. poor edward; poor bella!

simply said: WELL FUCKING DONE. THAT WAS FANTASTIC.

That was so sad!

I've never read anything sadder or more beautiful. That was really good.

Keep Writing,

xxTunstall Chickxx

Once I read "Cellar Door," I screamed. Seriously, Escape The Fate is my most favourite band. I was singing along as I read the story, and let me tell you, this is a great piece. Honestly, I started crying. After I finished reading, I popped in the CD and listened to the song and started crying again. I mean, you based the story on exactly what the song is. You are a wonderful author, and I love all of your works. Of all of them, I love this story of yours the most not just becasuse it's an Escape The Fate song, although that did win ninty-nine percent of my heart, it's just truely beautiful.

This has turned into and incredibly long review, so I'll cut it right here.

~Yuki

Oh my, this was so very depressing. I couldn't believe what I was reading, it was so sad, so tense. You did a great job of putting Edward's pain into words. His thoughts and feelings were so real, so...painful. The struggle between his vampiric nature, the craving for her blood, and the desire of his more human self, his eternal love for her, was stunningly written. You were able to describe what he was doing and what he felt while he was doing it, while still keeping him in character.

Thank you.

I always put the actual song on when I read a songfic, even if I have to go download it.

I'm really glad I did this time.

Absolutely amazing.

Thank you for that :)

Oh God! You had me bawling my eyes out in my Photo class. This was so incredibly sad and depressing. I believe that you portrayed Edward perfectly if that situation would ever happen. I can't believe how well you write all your Twilight Fics. I'm still comtemplating whether you really are Stephenie or not. You had me thinking what if I lost my soulmate. I felt so much despair, for Edward too. Basically you just blew me away with this.

omg that was so sad i have tears in my eyes. I hate how peoples stories make me do that. I was yelling at him the whole time. How could he!

that made me extemely sad...TT^TT...but it was still very good! Twilight is...~

WoW! This is an amazing story! Incredibly sad, but very well written, great job!

That was so sad!

LOVE the ending!

Geez!

You're amazing!