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Reviews for: Scream Through The Night
Rose Gilmore
5/5/08 . chapter 1
Wow, that's sad, but well written.
Aspexit too lazy to log in
4/22/08 . chapter 2
wow. this was really well written. sad and abit cruel, but still very well written. i enjoyed it alot.
Red14
4/3/08 . chapter 1
Great story! Very well written. I'd love to read a sequel to this, maybe from Toph's POV ^_^
Lady Redemption
3/9/08 . chapter 1
Oh, wow, this was so sad. You did an excellent job at capturing the emotion; it was definitely what I think Sokka is feeling now.
Andrea
2/25/08 . chapter 1
EvilAnimeGoodness,

That was great! I liked your play of words, I was able to picture it all out in my mind... which isn't something I'm usually wont to do.

Although, I think you made Azula lose her level-headed-ness. She isn't usualy the one screaming around "You. Shall. Not. Adress. Fire. Nation. Royalty. That. Way. Earth. Peasant!", now is she? And you made Suki look a little, um, weak, in my opinion...

But other than that, great job! I think you managed to capture Sokka's feelings perfectly that Suki herself seemed to be stressed and also stressing Sokka out! Is there by any chance you're working on another chapter?

Thanks n_n
razzledazzle41191
2/23/08 . chapter 1
Oh my gosh! This story is so beautiful and tragic at the same time. Everyone was so very IC. The characters really helped this story come to life. Your writing was amazing, no grammar or spelling errors. The last line really powerful- I actually gasped when I read it. Definitely going on my favorites list.
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