 Andrea 2/25/08 . chapter 1 EvilAnimeGoodness,
That was great! I liked your play of words, I was able to picture it all out in my mind... which isn't something I'm usually wont to do.
Although, I think you made Azula lose her level-headed-ness. She isn't usualy the one screaming around "You. Shall. Not. Adress. Fire. Nation. Royalty. That. Way. Earth. Peasant!", now is she? And you made Suki look a little, um, weak, in my opinion...
But other than that, great job! I think you managed to capture Sokka's feelings perfectly that Suki herself seemed to be stressed and also stressing Sokka out! Is there by any chance you're working on another chapter?
Thanks n_n |