This was a fun story and I enjoyed reading it but the addiction of Tim's neighbor was brilliantly funny :P

" “I’m a proud member of the UFA: Unknown Federal Agency.”

“Do they pay better than our lot?”

“Yep, and their dental is better.” "

LOL

" “You maybe,” Jordon smiled contentedly, patting McGee’s bullet-ridden shredder. “I’ve spent a month aiming at a picture of this thing.” "

ROFLMAOOL! ICB! ICB!

Laughed my way through the last chapter but seriously it's a great story! Thanks! I'm gonna add this one to my favorites.

Great, heart stopping start! Thanks for posting.

LOL, I love that you put they were assisted by two members of "an unknown federal agency" its so funny on the show whenever they flash their badges and people are like "who?"

Oh my god! I loved that you included the neighbour and the shredder!What a scream! The shootout was a hoot ,too!

NCIS agents in distress,Tony humour,reporter's FBI gaffe,Gibbs' disgust,Ducky's "Leave the lights...Good night coverage" comment,spot on reactions and chapter!

That last chapter was a perfect ending! Loved it!

oh, my that was a funny ending! great story :)

Your story made me crack up. The whole shedder thing was great.

That was really good. I found it very funny, it is always hard to find a good mcgee and tony fic that isn't slash. Thanks

Just lovely :)

Thank you for a good read, which is quite rare now. x

Cute ending! I enjoyed it. Kind of makes a good episode. Good danger and suspense, crime story and the usual humor of the group. The characterizations were good and the writing was tight.

Two things to perhaps fix: One Britism/Australianism (grammarly rather than vocabularly) and one typo.

“We’ll look for it after you’ve got to hospital.”

Perfect grammar on one side of either ocean, but it sounds weird coming from Tony's mouth. American character on American show.

"We'll look for it after you've gone to the hospital." (Chapter 4)

Americans don't "get to hospital". We "go to the hospital". And "have got" is slang for "have." Languages are fun! And it's even more fun when we technically have the same language and then you really get into the nitty gritty of it and find we don't! ;-)

rubbing the tips of his giners against his forehead (Chapter 6)

I'm thinking you meant "fingers" instead of "giners"

Good job overall. Keep up the good work!

the last chapter is almost a let down. The rest of the story was so well crafted. But... as far as sure satire goes... BRAVA!

That was great fun.

Loved the bit about targeting the shredder.

Very entertaining. Well done

Great story, I'm adding it to my story alert. Please keep updating.