Is this story only two chapters long?

gasp* loved it! X) another chapter, soon! Please!

i hope there will be more of this. ive added the story and you to my alert list keep going please

Love the story so far. :)

Update!

I really like your story

Please update soon -

LOVE IT! love it! love it! love it! You must update immediatly, this is sweet, cute, and funny and I demand more!

Aw. you could have described it further but alright.. ;)

this is really quite good. _

LOL! This story is pretty funny, please update soon.

I think you're a crack smoking monkey with crazy ideas.. but I love this fic for some reason. Keep up whatever you're doing. The best parts are Little One.. and the fact that Lupin is so dominate, masculine, tanned, etc.. and Snape is the fragile, femmine one. LOVE IT. Hope to see a lot more of Little One.. not so cool on Harry spazzing. Haha. Wish it focused more on Snupin. LOVE YOU ANYWAY. ...And lemon scene or two? ::shot::.

go lupin! get your man! lol. they're getting somewhere now... wonder what'll happen afterwards?

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wow. That was intense. I like how Snape has a caregiver... and Ron watching Harry made me smile.

I love it, even wood have love the love scene also. Have you thought of placing this on Snupin aka snape-lupin lj. They will eat this up. Plus can I also place this on mpreg They will also love it. Thank you for sharing

“Sir, kindly remove your hand from my shoulder! And step away from me!” Snape’s pale complexion went a soft gray color.

This is my fav line. I can see snape looking down his nosie at that man.

Love your story and going to read chapter 2

an orignal and creative idea to have severus bear harry's child. i loved how you made severus think about abortion, only to have him decide on the ethically good answer. especially since it was made after his reflections on his not-so-perfect past with his relationship with his father, and the abuse he underwent. though i must say that i loved how remus is portrayed as a very handsome man/werewolf and having him chase after severus... and of course, with not so much luck on his part. having his Little One seems to have softened severus a bit... though he would no doubt try his best, as i've read, to deny this and even try to keep up his image as the ever-so-snarky potions master of hogwarts. if he's so fed up with everyone's actions and exressions of concern now, i'd love to see how he's going to act later on. another thing i have to point out is that i absolutely thank you on pointing out the flaw that mist m-pregs miss: males lack the proper requirements that it takes to have a child. though we all know this, no one's really pointed it out. and it worked well since severus was the one to point this out, and he even listed all the possibilities of the hardships that the baby will most likely undergo if he's to be correct on his assumptions. i think you did an amazing job with writing this fic. i can't wait to read more!

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