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Cute idea but very jumpy and without a lot of context. Also, with Sesshoumaru in the picture, L should have been brought back to life, right? It just doesn't make sense for L to stay dead in this case.

I'm going to be honest, not that good. You can do better, there is a lot of promise with some parts of your story. The places where you have a good amount of detail are the best. But there is not real content to your one-shot. It's all hollow and leaves too much to the imagination. But great effort and the beginning was promising.

This was a really touching story and although i don't like the fact that L died you still stuck to the story.

I loved this story :)

Oh my god...Tears, you broke the dam...T-T

Awwwww that was nice! Loved it!

Made me want to cry even though it was short. Loved it.

AWWWWWEEEEE! the ending's so cute, swwet and sad XD love it!

Awesome oneshot

hey hey hey! I just thought of an idea! you should write a sequel where the ghostly L comes to Kagome's house and scares the living crap out of her! lol you don't have too...lol i just thought it'd be funny...lol

aw, so cute!:)

omg! great story! one of the best crossover's ive read so far (and ive read alot)

it made me cry! lol

thats probably cuz i love L

his death always makes me cry XD

aw! the ending was sad... you should write another fanfic of these two... please?

oh my gosh i totaly loved this!

I never realy liked this couple but girl you made me change my mind, they just seem too cute together here.

contact me if you ever wanna write a story together cuz i have a huge imagination but no real story line so maybe you can help -

i like it