I so want a mario video game with such action.

Seriously though, it was amazing in every regard.

HOLY SHIT! MARIO'S GONE INSANE! THE PLUMBER WENT 300 ON BOWSER'S SORRY ASS! WTC!

Nice! No errors or anything. Unlike me! Hehehe!

Later!

Am I wrong, or was there naught a single flick of dialogue in this?

BRILLIANT!

This is a rare catch- a story with next to no grammar/spelling errors, full of colorful (and somewhat gruesome) description, and just overall professional, polished content. I really enjoyed it!

Great. Work.