Ooh, very interesting! You've got some cool stuff going on with Younger Shuichi. I look forward to seeing more!

Oh, they never learn: don't mess with Kurama's family. SRSLY. O_O

I am so glad you updated this! When I first saw that this had been updated, I was scared that you were updating to say you were discontinuing, and I can't even describe my relief and glee that this was an actual new chapter! Wonderful as the rest of the chapter. You characterize Kurama beautifully. This chapter was just like him, and I think you portrayed his thoughts perfectly.

plz update soon, its difficult to find a really good yu yu hakusho story with kurama that doesnt have ocxkurama relationships (although i cant blame people for making them, kurama is my favorite character)

I'm thoroughly enjoying this story. I find it amusing how Shuuichi is convinced he's an action hero. I can't wait to see what you write next!

I really like this story so far, the plot is interesting. Just one quibble with this chapter:

""Then you how I feel every time Kuwabara runs off to fight with you guys."

Shizuru always calls her brother by his given name, Kazuma. Wouldn't make sense for her to call him Kuwabara when she's a Kuwabara herself.

That's all, though. Nice writing! ^_^

oooooh. been a long time. Hope you update soon.

I'm so glad you've updated. I've been following this story since you first posted it. I can't wait for the next chapter.

EPIC! For a few seconds, I was scared you were posting to say you were discontinuing this. Anyways, the rules treaded throughout was epic! Especially the last one. Please update soon!

-d101

i love this story!

Great story. Will this ever be updated again?

AH! *U* Getting better and better! *U* I love it! *U* Can't wait for more! *U* Rock on!

AW! *U* I love this so far! *U* This is a really interesting concept! *U* I've always thought everything was just fine after the parasite left, but actually...this makes a lot of sense! *U* Rock on!

Please please please please update soon! I really love your story so far. It's intriguing. You keep it so mysterious with such interesting twists on everything. I hope they find poor Shuuichi and I want him to discover the truth about Kurama! Ahh! You leave me restless. Please continue to write.

When r u going 2 finish this?I really wanted 2 know wat happen next.

An update. YAY! But why stop there? It was getting somewhere, and at least Shuuichi is putting the pieces together. Keep up the good work! Update soon! And you're not getting too old for this fic or any other. People of all ages love anime and manga. ^_^