This was sweet.

This is really wonderful. I love how you explained everything, his relationship to everyone so well. :D

This was beautiful and so sad, and I could totally see it being true. Thank you for writing it.

"One of those things Fai hated to love about Kurogane is how somehow he always seemed to be right. And in the end, when one too many sacrifices had been made to be ignored, he had to admit that being alive was worth it. That the fact that so many people were dead because of him didn't mean he had to join them because despite all his sins, if there were people who could love him, then so should he."

Wonderful! The lesson Fai truly needed to learn.

Beautifully written and wonderfully characterized. I loved it.

This is such a beautifully written piece of fiction; the descriptions were very vivid (to me) and the entire piece just flowed so well.

The part about Fai and Yuui's mother, and the one about Syaoran nearly made me cry.

Thanks so much for this fic.

So good... so sad... so nice...

I really, really liked this piece. I love how he enumerates the people he has loved, and the reasons he had for loving them, while all of them led to blood... quite fitting for a former-magician-now-vampire. The feelings conveyed are deep and believeable, and very much Fai's. Good job on this one. :)

Oh, oh, oh, this must be one of the sweetest, warmest, most in depth and best flowing fics I've read since starting with TRC. Please, please, please write more, I'm waiting at the edge of my seat!

I really like this fic

That was lovely.

So I am basically in LOVE with the way you write. It's so very professional and refined, the quiet elegance that just grips me so well! And OH we all KNOW they were so sleeping together -nod nod- -Yaoi mind goes insane- lol. . I seriously love how you have such a strong hold on Fai's depression and resignation up until the sacrifices all settle into his mind, it's truly beautiful. AND! How well you write Kurogane's convictions next to Fai's masked-pesimissim is just..ah breathtaking I swear. You captured the dynamics of their deep relationship, the way they treat each other, talk to each other, it was just PERFECT...

Have you ever considered writing a love scene between them...? Just curious because with a style like this you could blow all of those pretentious boppers out of the water and make me fall in love with KuroxFai over and over.

Love,

RIn

wow really well done!

Wonderfully written. :D Despite the fact that I don't really like KuroFai (not a big fan of shounen-ai/yaoi) I thought it was still an amazing story.

I really, really like this. I only recently started and finished TRC too, and I loved Fay's arch of the story. It's so incredibly depressing, but I just love Fay in general. So, write more stories please! :D

Wow, that was very interesting to read although a bit depressing, but what part of Fai's past isn't? ; Poor bishie... *pats* ;-;

One of my favourite lines was "In the end, it was just that little bit too late when Fai realised that he loved everything about Kurogane, even the bits he hated."

Oh, and does Kurogane have an F-shaped scar on his wrist? Was that your idea or haven't I noticed that?