Well, it's brilliant. Finally I've read it, and I love it. Even though there are people that say the character a bit ooc. But for me, that was okay, because as you said, this fic was set in the era Jane Austen novels, and you perfectly describe and well-written stuff like it should be, so yeah this is really good to read and thanks for sharing.

Well, brilliant...Finally I've read it, You are a really great author, I love the way you write, eventhough some people might say the characters a bit ooc. But that was fine, because as you said it was set on Jane Austen novel, it was perfectly okay and I love it. Thank you for sharing this.

So.. I usually review stories when I’m done reading them, but this time I don’t think I can finish this story. The story itself is well written, but I just can’t stand the push and pull between Draco and Hermione. In addition to that, the hot and cold way Hermione acted towards Draco and vice versa (but mainly Hermione). Honestly no one is that fickle, or I should hope that no one is that fickle. I know that this is somewhat the premise of the plot, but good God! No! Every time they made progress somehow they would just regress in the next minute. This back and forth between them is really making me frustrated!
I’m sorry. I’m actually not saying that this is a bad story, honest. It’s just that your characterization of Hermione is not my cup of tea. I had hoped for a more resilient and less fickle female character that doesn’t change their mind and emotion at the drop of a hat.
I really wanted to like this story! The idea is interesting and there’s no grammatical mistake to be seen. Perhaps I expected too much even before I read this story. Please know that I WILL be coming back to finish this story another time. But for now, I shall put this story down and clear my head.

For potential readers that are perhaps reading the reviews before the story, PLEASE DO READ this fanfic. It’s worth a read and could be more your style than mine.

Keep flourishing.

-AVLX

I honestly love this story. Enough to get to this chapter and be absolutely smitten with it. Your prose is also something truly wonderful and easy to read that I can't help but thank you for writing this.

My only qualm with your writing happened in this chapter where I noticed your penchant for making Hermione seem like she keeps running from all her problems. Not a chapter goes by without her running away whenever something shocking or unbearable shows up. If that's the way you would portray her as if she's eternally that moment when Elizabeth Bennett escapes from Mr. Darcy then by all means. It just feels a little out of character is all.

Kudos

"Tell her to go to Hades but since that's unlikely unless if she makes haste and dies soon..." LMAOOO I died XDDD

Awe. It was truly a tough journey for both of them to get to this wedding. You could have let Remus live in stead of Flint. Oh I don't wan to think of unhappy through. They finally got their wedding.

So Flint is alive, but Remus was dead. Wow.
Hahahaha finally happy

I know it is Theo

I think Theo is the real culprit here. Why did he kill Remus? Nobody question him at all. So Remus died for nothing. Oh my god

Sorry to hear about flood in your home. Hope everything is alright now. How could Lily be Hermione mother as well? Did she love two men at the same time?

Oh my gosh Ginny. Your relationship with Harry is lost forever now. Why did you agree to do that? Why did Remus hide this secrete ? Gosh his is so annoyingly?

Happy event for Dramione. Oh I love it.

Give them some love please. They are desperate to show their affection in public. I love Theo too.

Thank you for the clarification

There is so much secret to reveal, but as long as these two are happy, I'm happy to continue reading this