 Misskiss645 4/26/08 . chapter 1Me thinks Chloe is having some doubts about marrying Ollie but she also doesn't want to get hurt by Clark again either. Well I loved it I can't wait for the next part! |
 JateSkateFate815 4/26/08 . chapter 1OMG! That's great! I love how they're fighting over her.
“Clark,… you can mark my word. I know all your powers and I don’t care that you can turn me to ashes with one glance. But if you try to ruin this for Chloe… I’ll fight you till the death. And I know your weakness.”- OMG! You HAVE to update soon! |
 Kit Merlot 4/26/08 . chapter 1Nice story! I have to say, I do love seeing Oliver and Clark fighting over Chloe-can't wait to see what happens next :) |
 Warangel88 4/25/08 . chapter 1great chapter. I really hope it ends up Chlark i'm not a big fan of Chollie |
 beckychelle 4/25/08 . chapter 1i love it! awsome!
but it will great if this become chloe/olli( cute) and a jelous clark! |
 mar1985 4/25/08 . chapter 1Loved it! You so totally portrayed the heartbroken Clark when Chloe turned down his marriage proposal. What did he think what was going to happen? Her saying yes and they will live happily ever after? Fat chance! This is not some fairy tale that the prince in shining armour sweeps the princess off her feet to live in the castle. If Clark is serious about wanting to be with Chloe, then he better work for her love, he's so undeserving of it if I might add, and prove to her that she means so much to him.
Update soon, LOL! |