I quite like the hints just beneath the surface of plain words. This doesn't always hit true for a lot of writers but I think you nailed it. Still scratching my head about the canon reason behind Maru and Moro; I like your opinion on them better. Aside from the bits about X (which I haven't seen in donkey's years), I think I had a pretty good grip on everything you were saying- and I really like this somewhat poignant perspective into Yuuko's thoughts.

Thanks for sharing and happy writing.

That was amazing. You really captured Yuuko's character, and answered a few questions that I had had in ways that I hadn't considered.

What an utterly great idea, and excellent execution. Definitely fits well into the "clampmultiverse" feel... the last one is a killer.

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Aww...I don't want to go all mushy and senti, but I think this is really good. ;-) Cheers to Clow and Yuuko!

Wow, that was beautiful. Short and simple, but all that was needed.

this is deep! so meaningful and beautiful!

that is... wonderful.

truly wonderful. despite meddling with various stories that had no explanation, some that were intertwined, some that were not, you managed to work out a small piece of art, and it was truly beautiful.

for how short it was, it was long enough for everything to stand together, and give some obscure explanations that twist and turn but still make sense, even in clamp's own confusing world.

the grammar was gratefully great too. and the flow was smooth and perfect.

I liked it all, so thanks for sharing it :)

SOY