Not to bad

aww :)

Beautiful! Absolutely beautiful!

Aw! I thought this story was very cute, yet still hot! Good job! =)

aw so sweet! i really liked it! :D

Aww...don't you love this kind of story, sweet but deadly sexy!

Nice job!

Best Wishes

Holli x

Well done.

I especially liked when Sirius was saying he had no words to describe Remus. Wonderful!

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OMG, this is one hot story! Hehe, the imagery is quite vivid; great job with that!

This is really quite beautiful.

I really like how Sirius is left speechless. It really puts a quality of 'too important for words', which is fantastic. :)

Thats was sexy - you've made me very happy

This is some seriously good storytelling, haha!

I really loved it very very much, so thankyou for being so talented! :)

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