This story deserves way more reviews than it has. It is beautiful in all areas. In truth it was one of the most nicest stories that I have read. Thank you for the wonderful reading and Peace and Love my friend.

a nice read, well done!

Was it worth it? Are you crazy? Do you even have to ask?

OF COURSE IT WAS WORTH IT!

Now that we have that out if the way, on with the review...

Missed your little play at the start but your sweet fic more than made up for it.

The start completly caught me off guard, I thought it was going somewhere really angsty for a second! Great way to turn it around!

Love how you mentioned a little father daughter stuff in there, ya get the impression they're a really close family!

Your details and discriptions were great! I love how you discribe her smiles, and his discomfort in the roll play! You really write them both so well, they're really in character!

And thank you, thank you, thank you for not having Tonks beg Remus to marry her! I'm really not a fan of fics where Tonks comes across as desperate! It really doesn't fit with her character at all! I SO LOVE the way you write her so confident too!

This fic is a nice break from deep deep angst! Loved it!

-Katie

Wotcher Jord!

Sod this bloody ! You submittet a new story and the doomed site didn't even feel responsible to tell me! gr...

Well, on to the review. I liked what you did. Really. )

You did annoyingly well with Remus' part, still struggling with himself and not 100 per cent sure if what he does is right. Wouldn't've been Remus without his doubts... *sigh* (annoyingly because it annoys me to no end that he's still hesitating)

Anyways, you got Tonks really good, too! I almost expectet HER to propose to HIM! Though I don't really care about marriage (at least not concerning myself) I'd always hoped/imagined Remus being the one to propose. So, I really love this story, gotta fave it

As for the pm. I'll send you one later to answer that one *mentally drawing the troll's leg* *rofl*

Take care, 'till then! _

That was so sweet. I liked the role reversal and that Remus eventually got over his prat-like tendencies.

Jord, I want you to know that I know what I want (ah plagarism again)... and what I want is for you to write more stories like this. LOL :D

I LOVED IT SO MUCH, siriusly. I swear I'm giving you much love for this right now, cheered me up so much. It was just so sweet and so utterly adorable. OMG 'Shines up your shiny new best writer badge for you' :D

Honestly though it really was very well written and a uniquely different look on the whole proposal scenario. I loved the idea of Remus and Tonks role-playing and Remus just not getting it at all... Poor sod.

It really was cute the way you set the whole thing up though, like them moving in, procrastinating (gee wonder where they get that from) and then getting more paint on each other than the walls... swear paint fights was such a Tonks idea. And then having them at the park... I really didn't know where you were going with the whole 'I'm ruining your life' deal but I'm glad to see it worked out in the end.

And poor Remus was just as confused as I was, bet he was thinking 'Damn she's stealing my lines' LOL. He really was soo confused about the role-playing deal, for a smart guy he just can't seem to grasp simple idea's :D (BTW the whole Remmy thing cracked me up)

But poor Tonks having to take the initiative and try and get Remus to propose to her because she knew he'd never have the guts to just do it himself, and because she really is just too much of a girl to propose anywayz, LOL... she just wants the fairytale right. But seriously I loved the whole giving him her granny's ring deal but I must admit I was a lil angry that Remus wouldn't propose to her whilst they were at the park. It is such a Remus thing to over think it though... or as you put it, to have to process. LOL

I was glad when he came around in the end though, I honestly loved the last little part about him proposing to her. It really was short and sweet :D

Fav Line in the whole story: "By the way, you are awfully terrible at role-playing, darling." OMG that just cracked me up... I so love sassy Tonks. I really think you should do a sequel though, maybe include role-playing of a different kind... hopefully Remus would do much better at that, LOL.

Worth It? I'd have to say more than, a million times more than :D

HUGZ N KISSES

EllaQueenB

(OH and I loved the quote at the very beginning, it was so beautiful!)

This WAS a worth read! I loved this loads; great, great job! This was really good! :)

Angelica