Sarah: wow... you should have put angst in the genre as well. poor vaan. very good tho.

Woah Woah~! I normally don't really enjoy one shots! But this is very well done, and it really has a ring to it! _

There... I said it! It's really good!

;-; Th-this was so sad but lovely. I wish there was a sequel...would you consider writing one?

*tears up* & sobs. Beautiful but short & tragic. Happy endings please?

It is in a severe need of a sequel. Pretty good, yes~ I like your way of writing.

Oh, that is so awesome~ I am close to tears!

He totally should have stolen it. _ Very nice ending, very subtle and makes the /reader/ read between the lines. Excellent work.

I don't know the characters, but that you knew already, and yet, even if this was short, and had next to no description, it still felt like I knew them by the information you let in.

It was... fresh. refreshing, like a blossoming lily in the middle of endless tulips.

you've got an incredible talent as a writer, because in such little work you managed to write so many things. I liked it, even though it felt sad, to read about how he thought of the past, and knew he'd regret what he did and did not, and yet, managed to put that small ray of hope in the end.

even if it was short, it warmed me up incredibly. I am sure you're an amazing writer, so thanks for sharing this piece of art with us :)

SOY, with love