 Car 3/15/11 . chapter 1 Great chapter |
 crookshies 4/5/10 . chapter 1Sweetness! |
 math music reading 6/28/09 . chapter 1Oh my, that was so touching and moving. SasuHina love really is profound. |
 Dragonstar-dreamer 2/15/09 . chapter 1Just wondering what 1shot is this a prologue 4? |
 Rakero-chan 11/12/08 . chapter 1Where is the one-shot? |
 otherrealmwriter 8/28/08 . chapter 1Aw this is so sweet and well written. Nice job. |
 Ms.Naruto-Fan 8/17/08 . chapter 1awesome story! |
 CobaltHeart 5/27/08 . chapter 1Well if this isn't enough to make you love this pairing nothing will. |
 mac2 5/25/08 . chapter 1 Such an intense beginning. Liked how you described everything so far. I wonder if he will be faced with an inpossible choice next chappie. Can't wait for the update. |
 winterkaguya 5/25/08 . chapter 1poor sasuke...*chuckles*
i guess he's just suffering some stress related to being a father for the first time...
update soon! |
 milady.otaku 5/25/08 . chapter 1This prologue made me feel really uneasy, like something bad IS gonna happen. Oh, please don't make anyone die T.T |
 MistressArafaxdeep 5/25/08 . chapter 1I can't wait for the rest! It's so intense and I love it! |
 IWoC 5/25/08 . chapter 1You've come a long way...and I'm seeing a trend, you perv. ;)
You're writing a lot of mature stories *giggles* and they're rather delightful.
Carry on with your work! Soon, I should believe, I'll die from blood loss. . |
 narutogurl109 5/25/08 . chapter 1 omg, u must update! will hinata's baby make it to the world okay? i love how u made the whole situation all tense. |
 Diablo's Heir 5/25/08 . chapter 1sweet prolouge. update soon. |