Oh wow. Short, sweet, romantic, powerful. Loved the scenario, loved the ending. Very in character. Great job

aw gorgeous! I love it! =D Short and to the point..

Aww.. He should let her know how he feels! He just left! I do like the idea, but the story could use some development. I realize that it's just a one-shot, but it would make it so much better if you described things more. Also, Hermione just popping in there and joining in seems a little awkward... but funny so, *shrug* Only one more criticism: it's "recipe"

I like the pink fro idea and the idea of Tonks singing a made up song about a pink wig is great (that's one of the things that could be described more). Keep writing!