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Awsomazing11
1/10/12 . chapter 60
Hi, I just finished reading this story, and I thought it wonderful. Everything about! Despite finding it quite a surprise Eva died in the end, it really made the story believable. All in all, I loved it! :)

-Alison.
irianaceleste
8/30/11 . chapter 60
It's kind of sad, but I'm also happy that you let Eva pass away. I really do think she'd be happier there with Collin. I'm glad Luna learned absolutely everything about Eva and that Draco didn't forget about his sister. The end was definitely sad... but it was well written. I think this is the first time I've read something where the main character passes away, at least from what I can remember. Usually there's a happy ending, well this is happy too. I've never seen what was so bad about death. Thanks for sticking that thought out there!
Unwaveringhope
8/6/11 . chapter 60
Can I add this to the best fanfic I've ever read list? Favorites doesn't seem enough. Really I love this story, and I hate that it has to be over. All good things must come to an end, right? At some points, I wish there had been more Draco involvement, though. You're an amazing writer! Thank you for putting this story up! ♥♥♥♥
ALL022292
6/18/11 . chapter 60
This story was amazing. I cried at the end. for the last 5 chapters i think i cried. the grammar was great,and there were no plot holes that i could see. this was a great story!
HogwartsCreations
3/7/11 . chapter 39
I love this story so much! The portrayal of characters is accurate and the way you are making seventh year event take place is awesome. Please don't kill Colin! He is so adorable with Eva, also, poor Draco. It's too bad Eva doesn't realize he never really wanted to be a death eater. Again, love it!
omh666
2/6/11 . chapter 60
I feel verry proud of myself. I lasted this long without reviewing. Good story, I thank you for writing it and for posting it to this site for people such as myself to read.
MaleMystic
12/26/10 . chapter 8
Fix your fucking grammar ... Your plot is bloody nice but the wrong grammar is ruining everything...
nita
11/9/10 . chapter 1
How can she have black hair if both her parents are blond?
Mrs. Nicole Malfoy
10/17/10 . chapter 60
frikin amazing story!
silverbirch
10/14/10 . chapter 8
That was a fantastically written chapter. Very much "less is more". You could feel teh cathartic nature of what she said, but also know there is a lot more she didn't say.
silverbirch
10/10/10 . chapter 6
I know, I know, I should be reviewing every chapter but it is a page turner. Any wild theory I'm coming up with seems to get discounted so I will just have to wait and see.

I thought Luna was very well written, but it adds another layer of mystery. Who has she seen die?
silverbirch
10/9/10 . chapter 1
I've only just found this one. Now, I normally wouldn't touch a "missing sibling" story with a barge pole, but you write brilliant stories.

Already I have lots of questions in my head. She doesn't appear to be a squib, and it isn't as if they've changed their minds about home schooling so...I don't know.
biblioholic
10/5/10 . chapter 59
This is the best Draco's sister fuc I have ever read!

This chapter is so emotional. It made me cry that the war was over and that they finally realized about Colin's feelings. I'm suprised you chose to let Eva die in the story but the story still turned out beautifully. I especially like the photo album part.

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"A continuation of this, which would say more about Draco's further rehabiliation and his meeting of his future wife." That would be nice if you wrote a sequel or even a oneshot about Eva and Colin afterdeath together at last.

Rate 9.3/10
Lilacc
9/1/10 . chapter 60
What an amzing story :) Really. Very good. Those last chapters reduced me to tears. Eva so didn't deserve to die. But I guess Luna was right :(

Lilacc :)
hochexplosiv
7/29/10 . chapter 60
Do you have any idea how hard it was to read the last chapters? I could hardly see anything because I cried so much. This is a truly wonderfull and moving story.
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