nice

Dwaaaahhhhh. I really don't know what to say outside of it being a great fanfic for Knight Rider. Yay, I was becoming doubtful any of those existed.

love the idea!

loved it! keep going!

This is an awesome story. I really like the idea of 2K working behind the scenes for 3k. And I REALLY like the way you've portrayed 3k. Big cat indeed! I was just thinking the other day that while 2k reminded me of something like a doberman, 3k reminded me more of a panther. I love the visual strength in 3k's contours maybe even a little more than I like the trim sleekness of 2k, however that's just my visual preferences talking. And though the 2k and 3k really are totally different animals, I think they would compliment one another very well! XD I love the way you've tapped into that as well as their power and differences!

"A flash of a smile transmitted across the link, white fangs against the darkness. Understood."

M! I just love the image of fangs, love it! 3k really does have a powerful, aggressive aura about him. I can see him being "bitey". Oh! Now you're making me want to write something about this other side of KITT!

good story, I really liked how you had Ki2T thinking back about how he must have sounded when he was first brought online.

*grins like a silly fool* I loved it! KITT sending the Shelby out after Sarah and Mike! Great scene spruced up from the KR08 movie!

I really loved some of your descriptive lines in this - 'summer lightning', the image of the crouched cat with its tail lashing, 'the light hitting the blank displays in an imitation of life', and the 'white fangs'. Some excellent imagery. You have quite a bit of power in your writing when you wield those phrases.

Keep it up. I wanna see more :D

Thanks for writing and sharing. And sorry I haven't been keeping up with my reading and commenting as well as I should.

Nutty

(who has read this before, but read it again anyway :D)

Perfect! It's good to see that someone wanted to give more credit to the original KITT and not let him sit in pieces in that garage while the new KITT took all the credit!

I just love how you wrote this, old Kitt talking to the new KITT, beautifully done!

I like how you took one brief scene and filled it with a dash of past aire.

Having the elder KITT aware and helping at tutorring the younger AI, even if he was handicaped. It was a whole lot better than the hollow shell that was depicted.

Keep up the good works.

Till next time.

fantastic! really great story mabye you should have mike meet the old kitt next time?

nice...