OK ,I guess I was expecting something more. There's more of K18 storys than the other storys I was looking for. I was just looking for some sweet romantic fluff after my disappointment that there is very little father/son Piccolo/Gohan or Gramps/granddaughter Piccolo/Pan to read. Now I keep of finding flat storys of fluff with K18 storys.
This story isn't a bad story , just a bit flat.

cute one shot

You're probably going to chuckle a bit when you realize you just a review for this - but I LOVED IT, aaaaand since I haven't left a review for Vengeance since it was updated, I needed to review something newer of yours. heheheh
I seriously wish you would turn this into a chapter story... but you've got your hands full anyway. This piece is the perfect companion to the saying "brevity is the soul of wit".

Bulma's characterization in this is so SPOT ON that I can't stand it, wait EVERYONE'S is. The entire conversatio between Bulma/18 while they have their cocktails is just priceless. I was laughing aloud for some reason when 18 realized that the Trunks was Vegeta's baby, and that she refers to him as "the fat baby". HAHAHA. Trunks was kind of a fat baby.

I think you tackled some super interesting questions in this little piece. Who would have thought that 18, after having literally become a basically biological human, would deal with things like tampons? I mean, she HAD a baby later on so... obviously there was a need for those things. And the poor thing with no bra? lol. I just really enjoyed the little details in this, so finely crafted and expressed!

Not unusual for you, of course. ;) I just felt like reviewing this so here it is. Your ending is sweet, and leaves SO much open for the reader. Again, you've got enough on your plate but - I can see a companion one-shot piece to this! But you can ignore me for now.

A very poignant piece, typical of your graceful and light-hearted style, and excellent writing! Stellar, just stellar!

This is so in character and totally adorable. Krillin and 18's relationship is one of the most fascinating on the whole show, and I like what you've done with it.

Love it, love it, love it! :D

Very cute

Right a sequal to this .

This is incredibly sweet and adorable and it captures the beginnings of Krillin and 18's relationship wonderfully. Thank you for writing this.

Hey! I thought I might read the rest of your fics and I'm glad I did. I really like this one, it's funny and shows a little insight into what 18 thinks, especially in regards to Krillin.

I liked the line about the 'fat baby with a ridiculous power level' part, very funny!

Nice. I wish there was more lol

Short, sweet and to the point. Thumbs up!

I really loved how you wrote this, the whole thing about tension that you mentioned. I could imagine Eighteen being completely oblivious to the most awkward subject in the world XD

To be honest, i never usually like romance stories that end before they start if you know what i mean, but for some reason this one was different, it had a different appeal to it. It came across a lot more natural than most other shorts. I commend you!

Good luck with any and all other stories you have or may write.

Wonderfully written fanfic.

And you should get an award for that sentence:

"Thanks to Bulma, she’d acquired four pairs of shoes, eight dresses, two pairs of jeans, two pairs of shorts, three skirts, seventeen shirts, five bras, a veritable pile of panties, and more information about her vagina than she’d ever wanted to know."

I started laughing so loud the whole office turned to look at me... that's what you get for reading fanfics at work _

Thank you for the story

Great first chapter. I can't wait to see more. :P

Cool. Is there gonna be any more? I certainly hope so! It was cool.

Awesome story. :)

I really enjoyed reading it.