Dude thank you for sticking with this to end! This was one hell of a ride. :D

Finally over over this took way to long to read. Overall I enjoyed it, but each chapter was so long it was hard to keep interest in them and getting them read took forever.

I do have several problems though, first why you stated easier that all three are superposed to be the main characters Hinata clearly got more attention then Naruto and Lee. A part of me likes this, but another part is annoyed that one of the biggest plots for Hinata is her demon powers, while Naruto who has a demon in him got more or less completely over looked. Also you never properly explained why Naruto's eyes and chakra changed.

I would also put the fact that Naruto and Hinata never had a fight about Neji, but you fixed that in the last few chapter, but it was also cruel having it right at the end and if it wasn't for the tag I wouldn't have been able to keep reading to the. Luckily Naruto and Hinata made amends and did it, but also wished you added a bit more at the end where we see that Hinata managed to marry Naruto and have a happy life with him.

Besides wishing that Naruto was more important to the story and the fact I think he should have yelled at Hinata and got into a big fight over Neji much sooner, I also feel that Hinata would have ended up giving up on Neji if Naruto truly pushed her. But the way you wrote the two was like lovers, but they are both good and innocent, but there kindness hurts them so much.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)

Kill yourself, virgin trashbag.

This is great, but it would be better if it wasn’t in first person

This was an awesome story. I have one word for you, "Bravo".

As over the top as this "war" between 'failures' and ' geniuses' is, there is tension, and this is well written.

That said, your story loses all tension and seriousness the moment someone starts speaking in gratuitous Japanese. It takes me out of the story so hard that I can't see myself reading this with the same level of investment I would, had characters in an English fanfiction, just spoke English.

It's a gripe I'm sure many people don't have and probably appreciate, but outside 'sans', 'kuns' and the like, anything extra is a massive turnoff for me. I'll stick with this, but I really hope it gets turned down notch. I mean, using "mendokusai" in place of "troublesome" or "what a drag" - just why?

Anyway, rant over. Pretty good so far, though the complaints still stand.

Ok so neji is a major heartless dick and I hope he chocks and dies with his destiny shit. BUT hinata not retaliating and continuously says that she will do better for those that beat her because they are misguided is to saint-like, meaning even a priest would have trouble turning the other cheek like she does. Lee and naruto have major flaws as ninjas and I hope this story shows them maturing because naruto's ideals aren't realistic neither are hinatas. So I'm hoping this is them becoming a bit dark to do what they need to and do away with the shouting and stuttering/timidness because both are horrible traits as ninja. hinatas and narutos goals are very similar in that they want to protect those that beat them, neither strike against those that beat them repeatedly and instead just curl up at take it, get up and shout how they are gonna do better. This is horrible brainwashing and I seriously hope your story will divert from that and have them realize that fuck them let them beg.

Oh you son of a bitch... she was going to kill him and you made her revert! In this case, Neji is right! This goes FAR beyond "compassion". She's being stupid, weak, and refusing to see reality. She's doing the same thing Neji is!

I've never seen a person with so little skills in character development. You make a Neji a murdering, sadistic, evil, morally bankrupt, hypocritical, SEXUALLY ASSAULTING PSYCHOPATH and you won't let anyone kill him off. You CAN'T send a character that far off the deep end and expect the story to remain good when you try to "redeem" them

If Neji survives this I stg...

Just have Sasuke kill Neji already...

"Sorry, but he'll be a villain". That line right there made me lose all hope for this story. Itachi's character is the best in the whole series, and you just chewed it up and shit it out. Shame on you. And how do you not know about his innocence? Did you seriously write this without keeping up with the Canon? Double shame. You've pissed me off in a way that people can't even approach. Because you fucked with Itachi Motherfucking Uchiha

This fic was amazing! But would you please consider writing an extra chapter or spinoff oneshot that wraps up some of the loose ends? That would make my day so much! I adore this story regardless but I didn't quite get the closure I hoped for and I would so very much like to!

Also did you know that the children of idential twins are genetically half siblings and not just cousins?

Anyway, since I also hate the misery that the canon epilogue inflicted upon its character I would so very muc like to see a kids ever after epilogue to this too. Where the families are happy, close and friendly. I could just imagine cute little hanyou kids running around with a bunch of family friends, all having grown up together and experienced proper family get togethers, and the parents taking turns training them. :)

This story is just...wow

I completely forgot to review during this entire story. I've loved it from the beginning then during it also was appalled ( when hinata proposed to neji im still very sore about that ) and at different parts of the story I felt exhilarated. I didn't realize you were so young when you started the story, I am very impressed.
I lived in Japan for five months studying the language. I met a lot of friends and had a fantastic time. I can understand the meaning of all the Japanese words that you wrote, but for other readers it's a lot less smooth. I don't think it makes as much sense for you to randomly put full Japanese words without parentheses and the English definitions for those that do not understand Japanese. Since the story is in English it should be in English.

I understand that some Japanese words convey more meaning and feeling then their English equivalent Such as 頑張って(Ganbatte : good luck , Do your best etc ) or 嬉しい( ureshii: I'm so happy )、よかった ( yokatta: thank goodness).
For the readers that do not understand Japanese it's just a foreign language that makes no sense; even if you put their definitions at the end of the story, the smoothness of reading is interrupted. That is the only criticism I could say about this entire story.
I love it! I read it all in the last couple days and it will forever be one of my favorite stories. I look forward to reading the last chapter now. Thank you for your time and your effort and your diligence in writing this amazing piece of art.