Touché. That was a great read. Aren't Ryoma and Tezuka adorable? I love their dynamic.

Ahh..i wanted to see some lemony action..mou.. :(

oh, well.. it was a good read..it's my first time reading a vampire au from tenipuri and it was really good..i could totally picture ryoma being a vampire and of course, akutsu..when he introduced his name, i was like, duh..

anyway, good job with this one.. d(-.-)b

Aww, how sweet!

Ahahaha, lovely. Wonderful story. Not quite what I expected, thought it was perhaps (no offense) those trashy gothic romance novel. Only in a shorter, three semi-long chapters version. I love the ending too. Nice touch of humour there.

Very good story.

This was really good! :D Nice written :P

Oh my. Tezuka, Tezuka.

You know, I really hate vampire stories, but this one has somehow captured my attention and I actually found myself enjoying reading it. Great job!

Haha, it was very funny. I'm not a big fan of vampire stories either, xcept for a few occasional ones :D. Excellent story, loved it!

wow that was just great 8D i enjoyed reading that so much i reread it before i even did the reveiw xD aww i have always loved Gin he has a jackass at first but then he became a cool guy i can barly see him as a bad guy anymore though but its still great 8D i also loved how you just did friendship with ryoma and tezuka i hate yoai ( for this manga / anime anyway ) so i really loved all the brother love going around 8D

"Did you see? I finally figured out how to turn into mist!" - Oh my god, that's so awesome! XD *LMAO*

Ahahaha loved the ending! Yeah, I'm not too big a fan of vamp fics either, but this was quite well written! Loved it~

that was definitely the most unique vampire story ever :D not only was the writing fabulous, but the character interaction was well thought out and down right perfect if you ask me :] i really wish you'd make a sequel! once again, outstanding!

-cara

Love it!

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Aw! Loved it!