Reviews for First Year
Kylia Skydancer 3/6/12 . chapter 23
Just when I thought I knew what was going on, you had to shake everything up again! :P

This fic was...confusing at the story started way back when, the couples were Ashley and Andros, and Zhane and Kerone. Then we get introduced to a world where Andros is going out with Zane and Ashley is going out with Carlos. And the interaction with the first world makes those relationships break up and align with the relationships of the original world.

This really only cements the meant-to-be connection in our heads. I think the last thing anyone expected was the relationships to get rejiggered the way they did. I was definitely pretty confused for a bit and the inclusion of Ty just made things even more confusing.

After some back and forth, I've decided I kinda like it though. I have no idea where this will head next but I'd kinda like to see Ashley decide maybe she can share her boyfriend after all. The circumstance with all five give this team a chance to actually be really superclose in a way that hasn't been explored on the show. I really loved Kerone's attitude about Zhane and how she wasn't possessive of him or bugged by his sleeping with Ty. It speaks to what you said earlier about love meaning you think about the other person before yourself.

When the dimensional stuff came in, I was a bit disappointed that the dimension they contacted wasn't the one they had crashed through before when they went through the gateway. I think it would be nice to see that world again. This one is definitely interesting though. I hope Cassandra manages to fix things with her Saryn and her TJ and Jenna. I bet it'll be interesting to watch. I love how Ashley and Andros and Zhane are in the other dimension. it shows how they could be here.

I really hope Cassie's kids will be alright and not too messed up from their adventure and the Power. I kinda hope Kerone gets to spend some more time with Kyril. Maybe he can help her figure out a way she can have her magic and the Power coexist better. Plus, I kinda see a possible spark in them. i'd also love to see more of the Eltaran team.

This is me running off to read the next one!
WickedBlue 9/2/11 . chapter 23
Great fic. I think I loved that fluffy scene with Andros and Zhane outside on the road most. Those two are just amazing together.
Starlit Purple 3/19/07 . chapter 23
Still an awesome series! I don't like the Ashley/Andros/Zhane thing but I liked the switching dimensions. And I'm happy about Cassie and the twins. I still wish the team didn't have to break up but I'm glad that MOST of them are still rangers at least. And I like the new Karovan team. Are their powers based on cats? If so, that is so cool. I love cats! And your quote at the end...awesome, Shedaisy is my absolute favorite group ever. Anyways to get back on topic, great series and I hope you never stop writing!
tiger86 12/13/02 . chapter 23
luv it! can't wait for more
kagemusha 12/12/02 . chapter 23
great to see that this fic is finished it was really kewl albeit a bit confusing. Good job!
Guest 11/10/02 . chapter 20
*gasps* Andros and Zhane? KAWAII! *hugs you* Luv that pairing...of course it doesn't show up that often... Continue soon? plz?
HonorBridge 10/31/02 . chapter 19
I've been to your website and read through Ch. 21, and I can't wait to see what that next thing to happen to the former Astros will be. I'd make comments on what happens, but I don't want to spoil other readers. I will say that I hope you'll explore what happened to everyone during the time the Kerovan team was on their Power Quest, either here in story or in sidestory on your site. I realize there hasn't really been time to have the characters catch up. The Power Quest ended and there was what, one day before JT's accident happened? Will you be writing more about what happens in that universe, like you did with your Extraspace stories? I'm also enjoying the way the Ashley-Andros-Zhane triangle is developing. You are definitely one of the faster writers I follow, and your writing doesn't suffer for it. Keep up the good work!
Lindsey 10/18/02 . chapter 1
I can't believe you broke up Andros and Ashley! The idea of Zhane and Andros together just gives me the creeps. I still love your stories, but please put Andros and Ashley back together before you end the First Year serries.
K-Chan26 10/17/02 . chapter 2
I really enjoyed your story...I assume there is one that comes before it that introduces the new characters that i was silly and didn't read. If not you might want to give them bios. Keep on writing!
Jade 10/5/02 . chapter 17
I'm here to leave my review on my way to taking over the world. I meant to do it earlier, but it seems I forgot. About the first kiss issue...maybe Ashley was Andros' first girl!kiss? Or maybe Andros is just a big liar. ;) But, yes. Andros and Zhane are so in love! They should never be seperated! Woo! :D
Amy 9/27/02 . chapter 16
I really love the First Saga. I love how you explore the characters of Saryn and Kerone like the show never did. I like the way you're able to take something practically unbelievable about the show, like Cassie's infatuation with Phantom, and turn into something really cool. I'm glad you broke up Andros and Ashley-not that I don't like them as a couple, but that they need shook up. I like the way you've given Aquitar a complete culture.

I'd rather hear more about Linnse and less about Jenna.

One thing I don't get, though. In First Kiss, Andros tells Ashley she was his first kiss, but now apparently he used kiss Zhane all the time? Did he suppress memories of Zhane, or deny there was anything romantic about it?
Lunatigerstar 9/23/02 . chapter 1
I love your story! But Andros and Zhane? Kinda werid, I much rather perfer Andro and Ashely. It's a law that they should be together. Kinda confusing, but great all the same. Please keep Andros and Ashely. Andros and Zhane are just great being friends.
devil 9/21/02 . chapter 15
i like your first fanfiction but this, its not that its bad its just that how could you put andros and zhane together its just wrong you should had let it like it was andros and ashely, still i very good story
melodie 9/20/02 . chapter 15
please continlue. please put andros and zhane together.
Guest 9/19/02 . chapter 1
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