Sweet. Yeah, I DO suppose Marron would wonder about that.

(Eeeh... d'you know it has Krillen and Android 16 as characters?)

I find it cute~ and it really seems like a thing Marron would do!

Please write more. :)

Great story! I'd like to see this go further if your still writing. I love the idea of a 'kick a$&' Maron! :)

This is so cute! I love Marron trying to make her hair stick up like Goten's and Trunks'.

This was very cute! I'm glad I randomly found this, it made my day.

Oh, and just so you know, you mistakenly labeled the second character to be Android 16 instead of 18. It's something that can easily be fixed, so I thought I'd just point it out. :)

Keep up the writing!

Lol. That was great. YES PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE write more with Marron. She's too neglected for my tastes. I am a long time Krillin fan and it pisses me off to see how much he was thrown to the way side all for the glory of Goku.

Hahaha! Thats cute. U should make more of these little stories!

Cute! It would be interesting to see how that would turn out, though I highly doubt her mother would let her. (Heck the series implied that 18 was the one that made Krillin quit fighting for a while.) But yeah, that WOULD be interesting...

Good Story. I enjoyed reading it.

Is this your first fanfiction? Not bad. Keep writing, I look forward to more good writing. (lord knows the site needs it.)

Well, that was pretty nice. Your grammar and spelling might just need a very tiny amount of work. The beginning was good but the ending kind of wandered off. Even if you might make a sequel to it, you have to have a good conclusion to end it. Good work, though.