Ah, this manages to entertain me to no end. There are no words to describe my entertain-Ed-ness. Thank you for entertaining me.

Oh goodness gracious... For some strange reason, I am incapable of flaming you. Although I'll admit that I was devastated by the death of Gazzy... Who cares about the others, but the Gasman is MINE!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA

I feel like a heartless loser.

I know I'm supposed to be sad, but this was kinda hilarious...:D

HA ha! LOL!

Nope,nothing can destroy fanfiction.Even when the real books turn to dust,fanfiction will remain to haunt the world.

Hated the story though,it wasn't realistic.

Oh my gosh, this is bloody brilliant! I don't know why I'm talking like a British person! Alrighty!

But seriously. Funny stuff.

Wow. Interesting?

Ok, this is awesome. It's so ADD it's hilarious.

I mean, A Gazzy-Iggy-Nudge-Fang-Max love pentagon? I was a little weireded out, but I love it!

lol. HILARIOUS!

ROFL It took me awhile to realize this was supposed to be funny. Well, it was to me, anyway. Lol so messed up... but so funny... XP

When I finished the story, I thought you were being serious! I couldn't believe my eyes. Then, I looked up and saw that it was a parody.

Made me laugh pretty hard. Good story!

lol...this wuz beautiful

Huh...never would have thought of that...total pregnant, is he like secretly a girlDid? Did he/she lie to everyone because he/she was a lezbo and fell for Akila? How did he/she even become pregnant if Akila is a girl? Is Akila also a he/she, or did Total two-time her. And everyone else? Huh...

Whoa.

So I was calmly eating a cough drop and surfing through FF, being all bored. And then. Stop. Death? We? EMO-NESS? Click.

Okay. Max dies. Great job. Fang dies. Uh...159?

Akila dies? Going great so far...Total dies...

PREGNANT!

Whoa, whoa, whoa, what?

So...mwahahaha! Kudos to you! Have a cookie, wanna cookie? Hee hee!

-x-

Ahem, I mean...the story was really funny. There were several tiny mistakes. Such as, "Nudge, seeing Iggy aflame, tried to save him, but accidentally swallowed fire." The last fire should be replaced with "some fire". Right? RIGHT? -needs self-assurance-

-grabs Fang-

RIGHT?

-headflops-

Yup! The Great Fang has said so!

Great job.

made my day

:D