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one-who-comments
10/20/08 . chapter 3
That last setence reminded me of that Graham Bell guy who once said "Houston, we've got a problem" or something like it too
HermionePeace
10/20/08 . chapter 5
Cool, just write more. pwease?
garnetred
10/19/08 . chapter 5
Excellent chapter. Please update soon.
merlyn2
10/19/08 . chapter 5
I'm looking forward to seeing what happens when the Pevensies discover the truth about these other four kids.

It's a pity that we still don't know the backstory behind Peter and Hermione's quarrel, though.
merlyn2
10/19/08 . chapter 4
Note to Peter and Hermione: I wouldn't be too sceptical about men on the moon or moving picture boxes, if I were you. (And moving picture boxes wouldn't seem *that* absurd in 1940, since television was invented in the 1920's - though it didn't become widespread until after World War II.)
Yaoifangirl2005
10/2/08 . chapter 4
Okay, I like it. Can you continue with this? I like to know how it'll go. Though I have to admite I'd rather see Peter liking Hermione, but that's just me.
RoXxIdEvIl
9/27/08 . chapter 4
I Don't Mean To Rush You,

And This Is A Bit Hypocrite,

Coming From Me.

But ... Erm...

Update Woman!

We Want To Know

What's Going To Happen Next!
RoxxiDevil
9/4/08 . chapter 4
This is Quite Funny.

I Like The Idea Of A Narnia/Harry Potter

Cross Over,

And I Find Hermione And Peter Hating

Each Other Very Entertaining.

Keep It Up =)
digiwriter1392
9/1/08 . chapter 4
Love Ginny and her temper in this!
garnetred
8/31/08 . chapter 4
Excellent chapter. That must be quite a sight to see, Ron trying to get a hold of Ginny while she is trying to get even with Edmund, hahaha! Please update soon.
Son of Adam
8/31/08 . chapter 4
Hi. I just found this story, and I love the way you've wrote it! This is probably the best Harry PotterxNarnia crossovers I've read! I love Peter and Hermione's arguments! LOL

Please update soon!
HermionePeace
8/30/08 . chapter 4
YAY! I was actully going to message you today about when you were going to update.
Princess Lucy
8/30/08 . chapter 4
cool you updated,I've been waiting and you must explain more about Hermoine and Peter and why they hate each other
flyingxdragonx123
8/30/08 . chapter 4
Are Herry and Ron and the other two going to be in Narnia? I mean it only makes sence. if it is crossover. i loved this chapter. Hermoine and Peter are so alike though they hate eachother. its like ironic, i think

update soon
Princess Lucy
8/24/08 . chapter 3
I just refound this and she's married to Voldemort you must update
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