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SianV
12/11/09 . chapter 4
"It’s not like I’m going to go to a grocery store and pick up a can of tomato sauce and say-hey what’s the radius of this?" Haha,brilliant!And although I like Math,I must admit that most of the its precepts are not applicable to "daily pratice"...Anyways,you´ve portrayed Katie how she deserves to be: endearing and delightfully funny.About Jessie,I must say that every time you use the adjective "sweet" to describe her,I just´can´t help myself but agreeing with you;the character,in the show,just had that sonorous voice and that sheepish personality,which you´ve captured very well.Great fic ;)
FeelLikeRain
12/22/08 . chapter 13
Post more soon? It's fab so far =)
DemzRulez2
12/17/08 . chapter 13
amazing
Maxi-Luca
9/10/08 . chapter 13
Very interesting. I like the in depth of this story. The abuse was an interesting touch, I like it. I'm a sucker for angst. I just didn't exactly like how you switched their original roles of Jessie being scared to admit her feelings and Katie being the more persistant one, but I have to admit, it gave a different view which was good.

But I have to tell you, watch your continuity. A few times things were changed that shouldn't be over the changing of a chapter. Example, Jessie invited Katie to stay over and she said "It is the weekend" next chapter it's all of a sudden a regular school night and they have school the next day.

But overall, please continue your story.
whiskey in the jar
9/7/08 . chapter 13
hey, I just finished reading the entire story and it's really great..hopefully you'll write more soon..i like the introspection in Katie's thoughts
The Milk of Human Kindness
8/14/08 . chapter 13
Again, simply marvelous! I look forward to reading more
dude.loving.it
8/13/08 . chapter 13
wow i have just read the story, i couldn't stop... How could kaites mum be such a... a... I would't even know the right thing to say.

Keep posting and soon
Catastrofairy
8/6/08 . chapter 13
yeah for real, i just can't see why this doesn't have more reviews. it's a great story. i loved this chapter btw, good job. :]
The Milk of Human Kindness
8/6/08 . chapter 1
This is absolutely fantastic-inexcusable that it only has eight reviews. Please continue, I am very interested to see how it will progress
Catastrofairy
8/1/08 . chapter 12
wow, katie's mom is a bitch. but i really like this story cos it's so well written; i like where it's going. post more soon. :]
Catastrofairy
7/31/08 . chapter 3
i love this story :]
Mari R. Luca
7/21/08 . chapter 9
so cute ^^

there will be a kiss, right?=D

keep going!
seyheystevierey
7/20/08 . chapter 1
I like the way you have thought this out so far. Your paragraphs run a little long but you will be forgiven that since the content is worth reading. Your reviews have always been entertaining and this new fic moreso.thanks and keep up the good words
S. Avery
7/20/08 . chapter 6
It's great so far...Keep going!
Mari R. Luca
7/20/08 . chapter 6
its just great!keep going!
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