Where DID he keep the knife?

I actually cannot stop laughing my ass off. I had two trains of thought, actually... oh Aslan you totally nailed Edmund! Beautifully written, hilarious, and I can't get over how Peter does a great job infiltrating, gets caught stupidly, then Edmund's all like: when's the real rescue coming?

That... that was hilarious. And sweet. And angsty, And fluffy. And perfect

This was also good.

Very well done! I look forward to reading more of your work.

That was so cute!
I LOVED the humour- the way you were able to incorporate it into the serious moments without ruining them? VERY admirable! Well done

Edmund is perfect

And now I have two trains of thought on, actually but I decided to praise and laugh at this endeavor! It's fantastically written! :D I do so love how it's done. Thank you

Still reading
Jari

Another funny story! Prock, the faun who thinks he's part horse-I literally fell over laughing! :D

This is so funny! Dramatic, but funny. D

oh man the start of this is just so funny! great story all in all! defs a fav! thanks!

Awesome!

You had me laughing :D

Please write more of those oneshots XD

This is lovely. *hee*

ROFL! This was hilarious! I was laughing so much at the end...Susan hauling off and slapping Edmund.

I dunno, I'm with bravery and daftness can often coincide. I don't know if I thought Edmund was brave or really stupid...I think I'm leaning towards brave. lol

I could've sworn I've reviewed this story, but I can't find it among the list! So I'll do it again.

This was soooo funny! I loved it! "I had two trains of thought, actually..." "Renounce your claim on it!" "Death first!" "...Then where is he keeping the knife?" By the way, where *was* he keeping the knife? "A person can't be kept captive in peace anymore, can he?" "So, about that rescue for your rescue-"

This was hilarious! I really enjoyed this, the whole thing. Keep writing!