this is awesome! i wish they did something like this in the anime XD

Only in Zoro and Sanji's friendship is not fighting considered a bad thing! I love how you brought out their respective characters. Great job!

For mega cute ZoroxSanji fun go to youtube

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The name of the video is:

Opening ZoroxSanji High School Student Edition

By RoronoaYuria Posted on: December 12, 2008

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I love this! (huge smile) I just hope that Zoro and Sanji will survive Nami's wrath

The first story about after Thriller Bark event! yay! That's answer to my prayers!

You know, I like zoroxsanji but you write so well and in character and cool that I actually prefer the nakamaship interpretation

Thanks! You should write more!

The concept and situation I like. However, the story itself needs work. For starters, there are many times when you forget to capitalize. Capitals are needed at the beginning of every sentence.

Second, the wording of the story is very awkward, making it hard to read.

Third, the way you stretched the word "idiots" seems odd. Perhaps you should leave that one alone rather then adding the extra "o's." Or, perhaps stretch the "i" instead as that sounds more natural when said out loud.