| Reviews for In the Blink of an Eye |
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| harkie5 chapter 69 . 7/6 Wonderful story! |
| JD Thorn chapter 27 . 6/22 I happen to know the book of Job pretty well and I just want to state for the record that it was Job’s WIFE, not his friends who told him to curse God and die. But I also want to state in her defense that she too lost everything they had at the same time Job did, including but definitely not limited to ALL TEN of their children. She was angry, but even so, in the end she got blessed by God tenfold along with Job. But no matter what, children cannot be replaced. I do however understand and appreciate the sentiment of what thatwritr is trying to say ultimately. |
| chapter 9 . 6/18 Liking this story so far, but came across these lines... "It was bought out by, OF ALL THINGS, a wealthy Indian family from Atlanta who hadn't known quite what to do with their latest investment when it came to decor. SHIVA AND SARIS DIDN'T WORK WITH WIENER SCHNITZEL." Much too stereotypical, don't you think? I'm an Indian and we are SO much more than just Shiva and saris. This line can totally be done without. What's the point? It added no extra layers to your otherwise well-crafted story. It's just manifesting your own prejudices against one specific culture (even though you've rooted for interracial marriages in the story). Many readers could be Indians, and this line could be hurtful to people's sentiments. Please see if you can forgo letting my culture down. Thank you! Namaste! :) |
| chapter 69 . 5/26 you did this story justice. thank you. |
| chapter 27 . 5/25 I lived chapter 27. thank you. |
| kissforMrSmith chapter 69 . 4/9 Stayed up waaaay too late to finish this story last night, and now my children are making me pay for it! I Just wanted to say thank you so much for sharing this beautiful work. Its such a rare thing to find intelligent, mature, reasoned characters in the world of FanFiction. I found your story refreshing and relatable, and incredibly riveting. Thanks again x |
| Adriu chapter 69 . 3/13 Thank you for tour amazing story I started ti read THE spanish version Greetings from Ecuador Adriu |
| ecullenfan chapter 69 . 2/24 Just spent two days reading your story. I have to say I loved it. I love the work and research you put into it. I love the characters you created and recreated from the book. This story is one of those that will have me thinking about it for years to come, mostly because of the incredibly intelligent and thought provoking conversations the characters have. Thank you for sharing it with all of us. |
| Ticcing Bat chapter 69 . 2/23 beautiful x Just beautiful |
| chapter 2 . 2/21 Okay so I didn't look when this fanfic was posted but I know I'm reaaaaally late to the party. Regardless, I wanna say: THANK YOU for making Mark a POC. Holy shit, the amount of fanfics this site has (and the amount that I've read) and it's like a fucking Disney cartoon. Holy pooper, I'm happy to see this. Yeah, it sucks that he died in chapter 2, but the mere fact that you wrote Bella with this kind of a story tells me so much. I almost never leave reviews so I hope I'm not breaking any rules here :D |
| Angellovee chapter 51 . 2/16 Still waiting for stem cell therapy to be approved for MS. I want to see my husband walk again too but I'd be happy just to hear him speak again. Fingers crossed for the future. |
| chapter 9 . 2/10 For characters who take centuries to change, this ten year span has made the characters unlikeable and too different. I get you’re trying to make a statement about growing up and the ridiculous romance and fairytale of canon, but it’s too much of a change for this reader. |
| MsLiss chapter 68 . 1/21 A truely wonderful story Tears for me, again Thank you |
| MsLiss chapter 42 . 1/20 Oh I’m getting ready Lol |
| JustMePMM chapter 29 . 12/10/2017 Your story is great lots of depth and refreshingly original. Bellaquite clearly has her head screwed on right! Love it |