I love this! I fell in love the moment I saw and read the first chapter! It pretty much captured my interest. I love your characterization of Chichiri, and his confusion of Miaka's world felt so real! Even I was confused myself! Lol.

Okay, I'm so confused at the thing going on with Chichiri. Did he swap places with the other Houjun or something? He dyed his hair blue? He has two eyes? And the most important thing of all (for me at least), THEY CUT OFF HIS FREAKING BANGS?! WHAT. THE. HELL?! Miaka and the others would NEVER recognize him anymore! Dude, are you really trying to make Houjun's life miserable or something? Cause this is definitely the worst way to do that ever! (Not really...) At least Chichiri has her other self's sister, (although she's both so suspicious, annoying, but terribly cute and smart all at the same time) I like her! XD (yeah, call me weird)

Please update soon! And let them find Chichiri already! I'm so excited now! Please update?!

lolz this fic is awesome and quite hilarious!

wonder when Miaka and co will finally find Chichiri :)

and wonder what happened to him!

did the Jun from Miaka's world die?

and get replaced with Chichiri from the book?

can't wait for more!

~anonharo

Very interesting story! I'd love to see more and what may happen next. I do wonder if this is an actual Chichiri/Miaka fanfiction though? Either way I would love to see what happens next! Please continue with this fanfiction! Until next time - Ja Ne!

pleeeaseeeee ;OO continueee! hahaha the metal rolling things xDDD hahaha so funny! pleasee update! :D

Great so far! I love that Yui's engaged to Tetsuya and that Chichiri found Keisuke! :)

I thought Hikari was a little girl though, it's definitely a little girl's name...

Well done so far! Please keep going! :D

I love this idea!

OMG! I LOVE Fushigi Yuugi! It's one of my favorite animes and always will be! Thanks so much for writing this wonderful fic! Just the first chapter... OMG! I can't wait to read more... I'll be reading chapter 3, now...

And thanks for writing this fic! I love it!

Your Chichiri compulsion is a very good thing. *grin* There are far too few stories with him as the central main character.

Your summary was great, and drew me into clicking on your story. I like the visual of the book spitting someone out for a change. _~ lol

You have such a nice, smooth flow to your writing. As a writing, you also do a great job of disappearing into the character, you show, not tell, and make it seem as if we are watching him and listening to his thoughts.

You didn't mention if you wanted concrit, so I won't offer any except to tell you that there's a typo in the second sentence in your first paragraph- it should have the word 'protected' instead of 'protecting'. _

It's rare these days for me to randomly 'surf' the FY category; I'm so glad I decided to click on your fic. I look forward to seeing where it goes from here...good luck with the next chapter!

Every good wish,

KittyLynne :)