Great story. Looks like a good playlist too

You give me hope) thank you. Thank you for writing.

Your writing is gorgeous and I loved this story so much I didn't want it to end :) keep writing!

Ah! He manned up! Nice.

Okay, I get that this is fiction and all and their story is cute and sweet and endearing but I'm having such a hard time gettung past all of these strangers just offering up all of this amazing insight, therapy and direction at every turn. It's just so unrealistic that it's keeping me from the actual story, which is good... ;)

wow, their moods are giving me whiplash. and i just realized that this isn't marked complete and last updated in '09. *kicks self*

I like how reverent, sweet and patient Edward is. He's a winner for sure. I'm guessing the dog is Jake... Thanks ;)

This was a bit of a confusing story (to me) but I did enjoy it. I enjoyed the appearance of the canon characters, and their wisdom and advice. I (think I) liked the ending, because I'm guessing they ended up with each other, after they got their heads straightened out. But it scared me for a moment to think that you'd write them apart. I never realized how much I depend on Bella being with Edward, to truly enjoy a story!
Thanx for the reading enjoyment.

Great story :)

An intelligent, thought provoking story. I very much enjoyed it.

I really enjoyed this. EdMazin sent me and I'm so glad she did. This is a great little story - the angst is thru the roof. These two just chipped away at each other's souls - waiting for the other to make the first move, to "notice". Loved it when Emmett laid down the law. Everything is seen through the lens of your own perspective - which may not necessarily be the same as someone else. Fab!

*BIG smiles* Oh yessss. I was so worried reading this the first time that I had to go back and reread and let myself feel the happiness. Yesssss.

I'm so glad that they're not shutting down and keeping the other out. Loved this ride, bumps and all, so much.

Is he finfally going to stop watching her and start living with her? Ugh, I hope this was his wake up call. It felt like it. Ooooh.

No. Really? He can't break this cycle that they're in? Well, I guess letting her go is a break, but it's not what I want. lol And it doesn't seem like it's what either of them truly want. He can't forgive and doesn't know how to take a risk. Rrrr. Want to shake him. *half laugh*

I want to say yay, but he's still holding back. In a couple of ways. haha

But seriously, he's actions and in male mode and there's no heart to it. He's now, but not really.

Or maybe I'm just crazy suspicious. haha I guess I'll have to keep reading to find out.

Again, thanks for sharing.