wonderfull story

Very well written.

this is truly a touching story it really is. it would have been great if ash had risked his life ffor misty and something happened that brought him back to life.

Example:

Ash is the chosen one. When he dies jirachi or some other ledgendary pokemon will come out of no where and bring him back to life.

You need to start a new paragraph when someone else is speaking. Other than that (and the part where Ash murdered someone) it's a great story.

that *sniff* was such a sad story it made me cry.*sniff* sooooo pathetic huh. you are an excelent story writer. keep writing

That was just about *THE* *BEST* story that I've ever read in my life!

Great story I finally read it see ya later

I loved it. Very good. I thought for sure Misty was dead at the end. I am so glad that she is alive. I love Ash and Misty and I am so thrilled that they are together.

Great story. I love it.

hey!

wow what a great story...i think you could have expanded the end a little, it was slightly rushed..but in general, wonderful fic...you whould write more!

This story is absolutely one of the best things I have ever read. You write beautifully and this story had me touched from beginning to end. Keep writing! Rating: 9.5/10 (a few grammar mistakes, please don't get mad, but grammar is an essential aspect of writing also) Absolutely beautiful story otherwise; the ending absolutely brought me to tears. You have a great talent and I look forward to your future stories!

-Katie

A little too mushy for me... but non the less, wonderful!

cool, this fic was SO DAMN GOOD! Some real great parts. Ya gotta write more fics, I'll be looking forward to 'em.

Aww this fic was soo incredibly good. Drama and romance make great stories. Good job! *Maura*

Sweet, in a way and a happy ending. Ash did the right thing when he tried to protect Misty; Misty did the right thing when she protected Ash from her father. Keep up the good work!

Beautiful. I just loved the ending, with Misty's mom saying that she knew Misty would never give up. And then I just loved the scene with Ash hugging Misty while she cried for her mom. In fact, I loved the entire fic. ^_^ Keep up the excellent work!