Please get throuhgt T.K's B'Day. This is really good, waitied oh so long for tis chapter!

I don't really know what to say, but that that couch is EVIL!

Id like u too to. PLEASE!

I loved it. I've always said that they make a perfect couple and even got some of my friends to agree. You HAVE to write more! The Fanfic Bunnies are screaming on my back saying "MORE! MORE! WE'VE GOT TO HAVE MORE!" It's really good. Keep up the good work!

Okay, I know I'm a little late with the review, sorry. But, continue...please. But, you're probably going to just leave it there and never finish, huh? I do that a lot with stories I write in notebooks and stuff. I just get in a writing mood, then, I get out of it. Go figure. Sorry for the lateness. Good beginning. Arigato for your time. ^_^

Ths is good stuff! (Then again, I've always been partial to Joey... and to yaoi...) Keep on writing!

I love this. *please* continue it, it's awesome.

You know what, i don't normally read slash. Not to say I have anything against it, but it's not normally my thing. I just have to say one thing: THIS STORY IS AWESOME! I love how you write the characters. You really know how to stay true to a personality. Keep up the good work! Toodles!

Lame? What are you ~talking~ about? X_x This is the most awesome fic! *glomps fic and twirls it around* I remember you now, you're the one who writes all the incredibly brilliant BMW fics! I ~love~ how you write Joey, and I love how you have this written because Joey does his damnedest to act like nothings wrong, but you can tell something is in almost everything he does. Their motivations just make so much sense. Awesome, awesome fic! *pokes at you* Here's to hoping there's another chapter. *puppy eyes*

ooh! Harley/Joey! YYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYY! *jumps for joy* What do you mean, lame? This is better than anything I could squeeze out. This is great. Keep it going, please!

I love it so far! Keep up the good work!

Yes, do continue! I think you should have them go to school, and then Joey's dad could show up or something... But, I suck at abuse stories, ask anyone... 'neeways, great story!

contiune. it's good. but really how are you going to make THAT into slash?

that was great! please continue

This is very nice -I was never a Rat fan, but I like this story. Please continue.