WOW im from bosnia and i was part of the war and so was my grampa he was in the navy and we moved to kansas city and i really like this story becase i can relate to it :D

this is a really good story, its not the 1979 warriors cult film but nonetheless, you use a good description basis the only bad thig i can say is you dont expand the story enough, ty to elaborate and delve into a plot

This section is for the 1979 cult film The Warriors, not anything else.

I don't know "Warriors". I don't have to... I know a great deal about the war in Bosnia. This is breathtaking, and I do not fling such adjectives around freely.

WOW! I thought I was the only person planning to write for this story!

Awesome job though! Keep it up!

Wow. You are the onley one who wrote for this... Wel it was verry good And I hope you continue writing!