I listen to the song at the end. It was so nice, Almost made my cry. Great fic thanks for posting.

Hmmm... I actually rather like the Zexion/Seifer pairing, for an abusive type of relationship. ;)

I KNEW IT! MUWAHAHAHA! -dances around in a circle, chanting- (lol, that was rather unprofesinal of me, but I pretty much figured out what had happened in the first chapter, and this confirmed it!)

Ilikethis.

'do you think he's an alien?'

'wow... that was entirely stupid'

Funniest thing i've heard in days ;)

I like it so far.

Here I thought that it would last for million's of years and... and it's already over! *cries*

Vixie: And they sort of ended up together, just like you wanted.

Mmmm Hmmm...

I has a kwestion!

Vix: What?

How come the police in this place don't do anything about 2 rival gangs running around killing one another? I Mean, isn't that what they're supposed to do?

*grabs the bat from Axel and beats the nurse down* YOU LET HIM GENERATE FLUFF YOU OLD HAG! KIIIIII-YAAAAAH!

Vixie:... such violence. Wow. Nice job. =3

Why do they all do that?

Vix: Hmm? Do what?

Pinch their noses.

V: I dunno.

You mess up 'you're' and 'your' alot. *is a tad bit content with the couple situation*

THAT'S IT? *crosses arms and taps foot* I notice they aren't together yet, missy.

VIxie: She still has some time. CHill.

Grrrrrr...

Don't feel too badly, I'm not at all for the pairing either. *stix out tongue*

Hmmm. Something tells me this could maybe be important at some point later on...

Vixie: *whilst holding back the raging ball of fluff that is Fox* Why would you do this to her? She's going insane, worried that poor lil Zexy is going to die. I'd let her go, but then we couldn't read the rest of the story. Also, was Zexion screwing Seifer and not Love Love?

OH MY GOSH! ZEXY AND LOVE LOVE SORA HAD RELATIONS!

Vixie: Of the sexual kind.

*dies*

Vixie: C+ for the lemon mentioned. =3

YES I DID WANT YOU TO GET THEM TOGETHER THAT SOON! *jumps on you with madness in eyes*

Vixie: *holds her back* Well now she'll get them back together, so kindly chill the f- out.

*chills and glares at you evilly*