Very good! I’m favoriting this! It’s one of the best Naruto stories I’ve ever read, and definitely the best in which Naruto founds a nation of his own; or atleast it’s in the top two. I’m finding it hard to compare with another, they are quite different.

I’ll be looking into your profile to see if I can find any other’s so wonderfully good.

Konoha deserved that the ninjas and civilians were either cruel or indifferent to the point of ignoring obvious injustice. Naruto was treated horrible and the Hokage let it happen without any recriminations, they wouldn't let him attend either school and treated him like less than manure they shouldn't be surprised he left and they lost not only their jurinicki but a potentially strong ninja. Naruto mother would be so upset!

The Hokage had so little control over his village, from the day Naruto was born his needs have always been put last for the villages' greater good.

Naruto ha dejado Konoha.
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Naruto has left Konoha.

Es injusto que Naruto no pueda ir a la escuela.

Esas pequeñas marionetas son geniales.
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It's unfair that Naruto can not go to school.

Those little puppets are great.

Naruto está trabajando muy duro.

Esos aldeanos son estúpidos.
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Naruto is working very hard.

Those villagers are stupid.

Naruto perdió una pierna. Eso es terrible.

Quiero ver a Naruto usando marionetas.
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Naruto lost a leg. That's terrible.

I want to see Naruto using puppets.

awesome story

Great story.

This was such an interesting story to read!

A Naruto-centric piece with little to no mercy for anyone else who would normally be considered a "friend" or "ally". Power is useless if you are stupid/arrogant. And every enemy had that in spades.

A Fic short of deserving the tag "Darkfic", mainly for the fact that the main character does not meet an ambiguous/bad end.

However, pretty much every canon character seemingly met a fate worse than death.

Jiraiya and Tsunade? Dead
Kakashi? Presumed dead
Itachi? Living Tree/Monument(Or is that Madara?)
Sakura? Unknown
Sasuke? Unknown, infected with Eye-Virus
Neiji? Dead, Via familial Civil War
Hinata? Presumed Dead, along with every Main House member
Chouji? Dead
Shikamaru? Unknown
Ino? Unknown
Shino? Unknown
Temari? Unknown
Gaara? Unknown, possible 'Puppet' for Naruto

Naruto's Enemies? Either Dead or Dead Men/Women/countries walking

The Village hidden in the Leaf?
Dead. Destroyed by its inability to find a place in its Ninja ranks for a maimed child.
If only they managed to find and bind Tsunade early to help with his recovery.
If only Hiruzen did bend the law to his will and given Crippled!Naruto a chance at life instead of pushing him away. And turn him into this twisted version of Canon!Naruto.

So, after recalling all that, I can safely say that this is a "Darkfic" for every Canon!Version character, should they be teleported to this place.

To find "their" Konoha in "ruins".

And you imagined this World in fine fashion. One of the better pieces of Fanfiction on this platform.

Wow. This is only the third, in a long list of Naruto fanfic stories I've read through the years, where I have no single complaint about anything; not the characters nor the plot. The same three fanfics, including yours, had Naruto disdain monologuing. He was a smart opponent, a true ninja who hid his skills and planned well, one who knew that knowledge was integral. Brilliant!

I absolutely love this story like I cannot even put into words how much I love this story

bravo , well done

Amazing everytime I re-read this! Thank you! 3

Brilliant work. Well worth the sleep lost in its reading. Thank you for sharing and your hard work in writing,
~Rednax