 Elfinabottle 9/20/11 . chapter 23Very nice chapter with a lot of history in it. It's sad to think what could have been, if Denethor hadn't succumbed to despair, and his earlier dislike or jealousy of Thorongil. I think he and Aragorn would have made a formidable team against Sauron. It's good that Boromir is keeping an open mind. |
 LAHH 9/20/11 . chapter 23 Excellent update. Thanks for writing. x |
 Virtuella 1/29/11 . chapter 22Very well done, with the different contributions from all the peoples. |
 L.A.H.H 1/19/11 . chapter 22AMazing chapter. It makes me wish I could be there! Thanks for writing. x |
 Virtuella 1/2/11 . chapter 21Good to see another instalment of this story. Boromir would indeed have been able to give much useful information. |
 L.A.H.H 1/2/11 . chapter 21Fantastic chapter. THanks for writing. x |
 Abject Tears 12/17/10 . chapter 20I found this a really interesting and well-sketched account of how the events of FOTR might have appeared to Boromir. I enjoyed your attention to detail- especially in regards to the re-forging of Narsil. Please update soon =) |
 Virtuella 11/18/10 . chapter 20You know, I've wondered about this, too, this setting of in the middle of winter for a journey of weeks and weeks and not really giving much thought to where their food would come from. Thanks for bringing that up! |
 L.A.H.H 11/16/10 . chapter 20Great chapter. I thought the way you showed the group in the breakfast meeting with Elrond was particularly good. Thanks for updating. |
 Avocado Face 11/15/10 . chapter 1If it's an empty land then nothing should be happening |
 Virtuella 6/13/10 . chapter 19I had to grin all the way through this, because I kept thinking of the Lance Morris Men... :D |
 L.A.H.H 6/13/10 . chapter 19A wonderful chapter! I loved the dance so much, and how transfixed Boromir was by it. Thanks for updating. x |
 Virtuella 6/10/10 . chapter 18I delighted in that garden scene with the laundry. It's a necessary task, and yet you have given even the mundane a touch of Elven grace. Interesting idea that Frodo would have expected to die on the quest even as early as this. Interesting also Arwen's role here, it fits her well. |
 Iva1201 6/10/10 . chapter 18Arwen - I liked what she said here. If only Boromir would heed her words, remember not to listen! Although, I think he likely wouldn't have it not been for Lady Galadriel's intrusion. In this she proved to be the sorceress Boromir feared. I am sorry but I simply think that the Lady awoke something in him that he was not prepared to face - namely despair next to the already felt and so far honourably faced temptation. Nice to see her grand-daughter attempting quite the opposite. If only it would be enough - or Gandalf and Aragorn were able to show Boromit the true danger as much as Arwen attempted here.
Greatly done so far - thank you for sharing. |
 Iva1201 6/10/10 . chapter 17I like Elrond's reasoning why to send the younger Hobbits with the Quest - once more perfectly done. (-: And I feel very much with Boromir, feeling lonely as he does. |