Reviews for Breathe In, Breathe Out
DaLiza chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
Lovely story. Excellent job!
cindymc14 chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
YES! love it!
techgurl chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
Hey, I just found your fic and loved it :)

And I liked that it's not in Portuguese, because then I don't have to keep translating it all the time, hehe.

Mas vou ler as outras em português tbm, tá?
Katj21 chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
Loved it. :)
bcriet chapter 1 . 12/1/2008
What a great story it made me cry.
nonhalema chapter 1 . 11/28/2008
Fine work
Aching Bones chapter 1 . 11/22/2008
Hi there,

I really liked this...He had to lose her to find her again...But oh that this has not been resolved as yet and how long more will it take for him to really 'find her'...

As I said, I love this...

Ger
xim-chan chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
Nice, it always feels that that episode should have been longer and more profund!... Will yo udo a followup or add anoher chapter?
22705 chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
That was lovely...I knew he was dreaming but it was still such a nice piece to read. Even though it was smut, it wasn't tacky in any way, and I enjoyed the portrayal of BB...definitely in character.
BxBforever chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
I love it
blc chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
Very nicely done! Very wistful.
GirlinTheCafe chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
I loved this. You can descripe feelings, throughts so perfectly. The love in this one, unbelievable, 'Booth's dream' was just pure love. Loved it!
Monisse chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
Beautiful job with this chapter! I'm trully amazed at the excelent work you did with the descriptions. Everything was so deep and raw and absolutly straight to the point in an amazing fashion.

Your work with words is also very good and I specially like the way this story progressed.

It's a shame it's only one chapter long, it has potential for so much more.

Amazing job, really!