| Reviews for The Whole Package |
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Aewina-chwan chapter 1 . 3/10 Incroyable putain j'aime toutes tes histoires ! Je sais que beaucoup de monde doivent te le dire mais j'y tiens quand même. Ces questions resteront toujours en suspens parce que Oda nous dit qu'il faisait ça à cause de l'influence d'Usopp ... même si à mes yeux Luffy n'est pas comme ça et puis c'est arrivé deux fois donc je comprend pas. Et puis pourquoi amazon lily ? Chaque Ile avait sa signification pour chaque membre de l'équipage alors pourquoi cette île là pour lui ? Kuma ne voit pas dans l'avenir ils ne pouvaient pas savoir qu'elle l'aurait aidé avec Ace .. non vraiment je me demande ! One piece est tellement rempli de mystère j'ai hâte qu'ils soient résolus en espérant qu'ils le soient un jour. Amazing story Luffy est adorable. |
SunMoonNeko chapter 1 . 9/22/2015 This little one shot is the purist and probably the most in character bit between them. I've only ever read that Luffy only reacts to seeing Nami naked in the series, other wise he just ignores the woman. Unofficially Luffy is termed to being asexual so creating romance for him is pretty difficult to do without changing major factors of his personality as well as balancing the 'my friends are my family' theme, but this was just PERFECT. |
Frosty Abyss chapter 1 . 7/31/2015 You've got a point about the reacting. It was so cut and hilarious! Well done! |
Franky chapter 1 . 8/18/2014 this was a SUPER cool fic even though ussop was part of the reson why luffy reacted I still think this could actually happen in the show, good job on keeping them in character, this fic was SUPER indeed |
doubledamn chapter 1 . 8/20/2013 This was nice. A nice little piece of fluff. Good job. |
Djflemse chapter 1 . 6/20/2013 finally a great LuNa story with the meeting of Hancock and Nami, I have been waiting for so long for such a story because i love how i could be if they met and Luffy showed interest in Nami, and then how Boa would react to this, also how Nami would react to the stories from Amazon Lily, if she showed interest aswell. Last but not least great story. |
yosh chapter 1 . 11/15/2012 Not to be mean or anything, but Oda-sensei stated that Luffy only reacted at Nami's naked body because Ussop was there, thus awakening that side of him. Like being dragged into the pervert side for while just to join the fun with your friend. Ahaha, can't help to point this out, since I'm a Luffy-Hancock fangirl, but great fic! |
Apfane Chan chapter 1 . 9/5/2012 oooo I never noticed that but you're completely right Oo the whole package! yeah I can totally see luffy thinking that way! excellent |
moira33 chapter 1 . 7/27/2012 A very good story I love Luffy he is such an honest me Nami is perfect for him not Boa I do not understand what her fans see in her .I accept she is beautiful and strong but to be perfect for Luffy I doubed all the way |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2012 cute fanfic! i didnt realise luffy reacted to nami's nudity incidence though. nice way of pointing it out :D very observant i've always prefered namixluffy than hancockxluffy way to go |
narutofan96sasuke chapter 1 . 5/9/2012 I would like to tell you that Oda says Luffy reacted to Nami because Usopp was there. |
fandelyraandlance chapter 1 . 4/15/2012 great story! |
Lyneel chapter 1 . 4/8/2012 cool! that was lovely |
luffylover chapter 1 . 6/30/2011 i understand where you are coming from here, but luffy reacted to nami like that because it was nami and she is always well put together and doesn't allow herself to be looked down upon or to be disgraceful. so when she flashed all of the guys she did a disgraceful act and it shocked all of them. luffy didn't react to Hancock at all because he saw her mark and was thinking of Hachi the first time and then the second time he had his mind set on food and if you know luffy you know he has a strict one track mind. so it's no surprise that he didn't react. Honestly I'm looking for Hancock and Luffy to get together, Sanji and Nami, Franky and Robin, and then i'm hoping girlfriends will enter for Chopper and Brook. Sorry if that is a different view from what you have, but it's my own opinion. I really loved the story the whole package and part of it could be true we'll just have to wait and see what happens. PS, if nami and luffy do end up together i really hope there will bw a big battle against Hancock. Maybe you should write one to tell us who one completely. Nami or Hancock! Looking forward to seeing it. |
asumi-chan chapter 1 . 6/20/2011 I know right I can't believe everyone missed that. That Luffy only let Nami hold his hat more than once. The only reason he let Vivi hold his hat is because Nami wasn't around when he went to fight Crocodile. Thank you for this story I was waiting for someone to make a story like this. |