the stories so sad...:(...why did it have to end so sad?

but i have to admit this was a really good piece of writing :)

Damn sad but good writing.

Why did it have to be so sad?

dammit woman...now you have me all wondering exactly what Bren wanted...just a surrogate baby or married with all the trimmings...god...and do you think thats what Booth was thinking...or was he just being selfish not wanting another kid...gr argh...

of course it was great but geesh...

hanging here but that was your point...right?

lovely read as always

fab

Wow, this was a wonderful piece. It was very different from a lot of the other works out there dealing with this same topic, but by no means less enjoyable.

oh my god, what happened? poor brennan.

Please say you are going to contuine. Pretty please x

Hm, I really like this story but I feel as though there should be a sequel, I would really like to see some more of their relationship...anyways just a thought!

You should write a fic about Bones accidentally getting knocked up...hehe.

Well, that was...well...angsty. Loved the scene you portraied between them.

THE END? Are you KIDDING?

You've got to continue...ok, you don't have to cos it's your story, but I'd love to know what happens next! I'm subscribing just in case you DO decide to continue lol :)

ooh cute and sad at the same time... great!

HawkAngel

I think that'd make a great multi-chapter story.

Very intersting and different point of view. but quite in character...

Oh, now this is a different and an original view from the majority of stories I've read. But I really liked it, though, with all its angsty moments. I would love to see some more. It seems to me a beginning of totally awesome story. Loved it really. And your style of writing is completely beautiful. :):):):)

Please continue it was good, just ended too quickly

This was so sad!