| Reviews for Eternal Return |
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amr56 chapter 1 . 10/7 This is horrifying. Beautifully written. Thanks! |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/20 Constructive criticism ahead (I love to give pointers to the author and to people reading reviews): I agree with a previous reviewer - the time loop at the end is aesthetically pleasing, for a lack of a better term, (actually, this whole story is aesthicially pleasing!), but plot-wise, not necessarily the best choice. It's one of those things which seems really clever the first time you see it, and then it just gets boring/cliché. If you were going for a mind-blowing conclusion, this honestly wasn't it, but the "aesthic" of it still does leave the reader satisfied. A second question/comment - why did Harry have to "follow the timeline"? I'm usually skeptical of these things, especially when the timeline is ALREADY changed by having Harry there in the first place. Starting a subtle pro-Muggle born campaign as Tom Riddle, for example, would probably have been an easier way to wipe out the evil than creating horcruxes. With all that out of the way - I enjoyed this! It was well-written, and captured emotion well. Nice and consistent style. Thanks for writing! |
Kuchiki Erza chapter 1 . 9/1 Why |
Azura Slytherin chapter 1 . 8/3 Clever |
kaftan chapter 1 . 6/29 The loop may look good aesthetically but story-wise Harry’s reason to follow everything that has already happened all again is just so very weak. It’s like he’s made a pawn of himself all on his own. |
Lola chapter 1 . 6/7 God I know this doc is so fuckin old but I keep coming back to it cuz it resonates w me as strongly as the first day I read it |
thepkrmgc chapter 1 . 6/2 this is utterly horrifying, nice work! |
MissFortune12 chapter 1 . 4/3 This was absolutely amazing! Tragic, yes, but still one of the best fics I read. |
Kuroki8 chapter 1 . 3/3 nice :) |
JKBaller chapter 1 . 2/25 Well, this is officially the most depressing fanfic I have ever read. |
sinor gamer chapter 1 . 2/4 I really don't understand your version of greater good |
Lee Glance chapter 1 . 11/29/2017 This is horrifying and heartbreaking. I hate this fic, beause it is just so cruel to Harry and also so tragic. But I can't honestly truly hate it, because it is simply breathtaking. Thank you for ripping my heart out. I will never be able to see Voldemort the same way ever again. Good job. |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/20/2017 He in the last sentence is who? sad lifetime of pain |
Muna chapter 1 . 11/12/2017 This was brilliant! I always love this sort of time loop type of stories! I kind of wish there was a sequel but then again the sequel would reduce quite a lot of the mysterious and creepy vibe. It was so amazing to read along as Harry tries to do his best to replicate Voldemort's life and the end left me with this wonderful feeling of confusion and the urge to know more :D I just realised that one way this could be interpreted as is that Harry Potter was actually the piece of Voldrmort's soul all along and that's why he's reborn as Tom. |
seldombites chapter 1 . 11/11/2017 This is brilliant. I love it. |