another cute and funny chapter. poor guys. maybe you should combine some chapters though to make them longer.

cute chapter. and i love zack he's hilarous. still wanna see exactly how cloud's gonna react tho.

Zack suddenly realized why Cloud and Tifa got together so well.

They both could make you fell oh so welcome.-lolz.

i love this story it's so funny and cute and all that.

She smiled slightly at the sudden outburst on the other end, and patiently listened to Cloud’s rant about almost freaking him out on the other side of the Planet.

Obviously her not picking up her phone for eleven times has shaken the world’s hero to the core. Somehow that was a reason to feel pretty good about herself.-lolz

another good chapter. can't wait to see cloud's meeting.

hmm nice welcome he got. liked her reaction it seemed pretty believable. funny too. wouldn't mind if the chapter was a little longer though.

good first chapter. it's already interesting!

THANK THE LORD YOU FIXED IT! And very well indeed, I must say. I really enjoyed this, all teh way through - thank you SO MUCH for writing it!

please tell me theres another story after this that was gripping there at the climax.

nice i can't belive it is over

this is the end already? this story is too good to end! just when i was so happy that zack and tifa finaly made up, i am now sad because this is the end to such an awesome story...

Aww, I'm such a sucker for happy endings and I'm glad that he's staying.. plus, kissing in the rain? Hot. And so appropriate, it seems, for them.

...Wow...There were so many emotions going through that one that I don't even know where to begin. So I guess I'll start with the fun stuff. The interaction between Zack and the kids is just so good. Gotta love kids. They're so much smarter than we give them credit for. ;) It's interesting how you've made Tifa the one afraid to love, and it's utterly breathtaking how well you draw out the tension between them. Though I must say, that was pretty brutal to leave us all hanging like that. I must know what happens! Looking forward to your updates (soon please!)!

I think I may cry - I cant believe you! That is of the saddest things I have ever read. It was wonderful and all, but I spent the majority of the chapter screaming 'no' at the computer screen. It didn't help.

So update soon and sort it out!

So I read it. And it comes to the point that i want to spank Tifa. With a shovel most likely.

A man like Zack, presenting himself to her, probably the only thing missing there is a freaking blue ribbon on his head, and she still says NO?

All that materia must have affected her judgement. BTW - i know you're busy but if you leave the next chapter for another month, I will... I will... I will send Aerith to plant flowers on the field where your house is gonna be and it will never get built! And then she will come to live with you - ULTIMATE REVENGE!

yay, new chapter!

man, you are really giving zack hell huh? or more like tifa is. it must be so painful for him to pour his heart out for tifa, and then she just kicks him in the nuts. why does tifa keep doing this to him? WHY! poor zack, wonder how much of this he can take before he completely looses it. even a light-spirited person like him has limits right? all i know is that if i was him, i would have broken a pile of bricks with my forehead by now.

great chapter. please update soon, i cant wait to see what happens next. i really enjoy reading this story.