This is great - sorry, I've nothing more intelligent or insightful to say... I just really liked it!

Excellent work. The present tense, sensorry information, and sentence structure gives it an excellent sense of immediacy. Well done!

This is so beautifully in character. Recoil was an amazing episode. Ziva broke my heart every time she was on screen. It would have taken a long time to get over.

I'd have loved to read more but it's great as it is. I love your writing style. And, I just love this. xx

loved it. had me captivated from the beginning. Would love to see more chapters...many many more!