I love this story! The part of Nash was great. I think it was an interessing dialouge~

I love the way how you show the ironic character of Clive.

The end was amazing that he is the victim, who should be manipulated.

Sorry for my bad English, I want only say that the story is great.

Not bad, but I was a bit confused trying to tell the difference of when Clive was speaking in the past and when he was speaking in present time but other than that not bad.

The one thing I would like to point out is the "I loved you and Clive from the bottom of my heart" line was actually what Kelly was saying to Elza when he was dying, not vice versa.

Hm, let's see...

you built the story and the characters well (especially Clive, since I like him so much). From my side, this is a good story (but your grammar still needs to be improved)

Your writing style was a little average in this fic, but your event-planing and good characterization made up for it *adds to favorites*

you have no idea how much I loved this fic .. I read it two times .. I'm a big fan of Clive .. too bad no one wrote about him here .. I think he is so cool .. I love his stroy .. I think konami should make a special game for him .. you really did a great work .. I really mean it .. It was really sad _ ..

too bad I didn't get suikogaiden . please write more about Clivy ..

I'm adding this to my favorite . . and you are one of my favorite Authers .. I like your other story ( Interview with Zexen Knights ) .. woW this is my longest review ever 0_o ..

Ohhhh I really loved it ) I wish I could have played Suikogaiden, but at least suikosource recapped it! I really liked this fic, great job )

wow.

That was very nice! Ahhhhh! I love Clive stories as much as I love Hero2 and McDohl fanfics :D man, I wanna play Suikogaiden tooooooo! T.T

nice! i really really like it! no one really makes elza/clive ficcys.. im trying to make one myself!

mmmm.. kewl..

it really makes me wonder.. but mostly BELIEVE...it really draws me into the story.. great workk..!