Wonderful stroy,although there were a few mechanical mistakes. And I love the end.

I love the moments where the two of them have a dialogue with no tags...their way of speaking is very well written, as it's distinct enough for me to be able to tell who's speaking ). Great job! The ending had a nice little punch of humour, as well as a nod to the slightly darker/selfish edge that is definitely present in Mai.

Fabulous!

Cool story, now about Reunited...

Haha, I liked it! Loved the ending too, it figures that's how THEY (not just Mai, hehe) got out. :P Nice story!