:D oh yeah. Fine work here.

I dont get it; was it the game in the end of the story or back to the real world? please I DONT GET IT? HELP ME?...

Oh! This one is great, too! I love the end . . . had no idea that would be a consequence!

I like that you had some very realistic scenarios in there, too. Not just happy fluffy all the time.

Wow. Just wow. That was an awesome story, I absolutely loved it. The ending was a complete surprise but just as awesome as the rest. I loved all the different lifetimes; it was neat that he tried being Elizabeth at one point too. Really, really cool story: I have this big grin on my face and I can't think of anything to say except Thank you! I loved reading this.

hmm. it reminded me of that mirror in harry potter were your just mesmerized and forget real life. very interesting.

Interesting story. Was kinda hard to follow in the middle, (had to reread a couple times, must be my tire brain). Loved the end. Hadn't expected that.

Great story!

uh ... WOW ! that was amazing! heh. brilliant! *is speechless*

I always enjoy your stories thanks for sharing. I really wish Elizabeth was still around and of course with John. Looking forward to the next story you write for us.