Man, so beautiful..

i always see with narusasu fanfics sasuke's a little more open than he really is. and this was good, i loved it
thank you

Liked it, thank you for the story!

For smut it was very beautiful.

liked it a lot ;)

Simple, yet absolutely amazing. Very good characterization. Apt. Loved it!

Ag, this is too good. I can't explain it. I think it's very sweet.

This is well written and very extremely kawaii. I love it and thank-you for writing such a lovely story! . .

Fuuuuuck~~ You are a D.A.M.N! good writer! (runs to check what else you've written) I absolutely _looove_ this~~~

Wow, this story is also really good.

I love your descriptive way of writing, and the way you portray Sasuke and Naruto's personalities, and imperfections.

I think your idea of their 'control' is really good, and very likely, seeing who they are. :)

I can't believe you only have three stories on xD

The last line was... wow... perfect.

This is just gorgeous. I love how you've explored the theme of control with Naruto and Sasuke. Your writing style is perfect for this fic, and the last line? Perfection.

wow... that was good

Aw that has to be the sweetest thing I've read today. I love how you are too the point without taking things fast. It's perfect and emotional just like how I like my stories.

Wow! I'm speechless. You've protrayed everything so well - communication through touch, the ubderstanding they share and the emotions. I think my favorite line was:

Just "Naruto..." stretched out, rough, like a curse. Soft, like a prayer.

Again, you really don't waste words. I usually prefer descriptive writing, but I think I've fallen in love with your concise, to-the-point writing style. Beautiful.

Very very good!