Sweet

the ending's so swee. i love it! :)

Ahhw..this was such cute lemons=DIt made my heart all warm and fluffy.

Arigato for a good story=)

I have to be honest, this is probably one of the best one shots that I have read. It walks the thin line between sweet and sexy and raw need, difficult balance to accomplish. Love it.

It was a well done "heated" chapter for sure. Teasing in the details of their meet and how they felt about each other helped to make the story more than just and "action" one. I'm typically not a fan of "M" fanfiction...unless of course there's a good plot. So I do appreciate the detailing of their meeting and the whys of how they feel the way they do. Thanks for sharing.

OMG I loved it so much! It was sweet and the way you portrayed their feelings was beautiful. I enjoyed every word of it.

Thank you!

great! :)

Very well done.

How! Idk what to say! That was so...*searching for word*...Wait!...*points to word in dictionary*...Darling! Or something like that. Basically, I like it.